All Comments on 'This Side of Death Ch. 09'

I'm very pleased that the readership remained constant from the 2nd chapter on. Thank you all for you interest despite there being many flaws. Would love to hear some comments about the story now that all 9 chapters have been published. -L

Perhaps switching from Erotic Couplings to Romance has had a negative effect on readership and voting. Any comments on which one you readers think it should be listed under?

It's a great story. I would have never seen it under 'Erotic Coupling' because I don't read that category. When it popped up in Romance, I read the whole thing and enjoyed it. Great story line, a bit hyperbolic, but hey, it's your story. Great technical knowledge of the kayak and 'outdoors' which I appreciate. I don't give a lot of 5's but you got 9.

Thank you for a great story. I enjoyed the references sprinkled in the chapters.