All Comments on 'Chapter 01: This Time Tomorrow'

by Tenenbaum

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
keep writing

for your first submission, this is a good read. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Very good. Keep the story going.....

SweetSam42SweetSam42over 10 years ago

Passionate and hot! Can't wait for more!

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