All Comments on 'Thomas and Niko Ch. 02'

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uniliveuniliveover 5 years ago
Reassured

OK you piqued my interest this time, even if they only have sex in ten chapters. I'll read any story from you anyway, you write so well. But if you could make it hot too then that'd be like, a twenty out of ten!!

sj_53sj_53over 5 years ago
Not Erotica Yet

Not gay yet either. We get it. Nico was a neglected kid, but he's 18 now the story needs to move along. Somebody needs to actually have sex!

MrsgnomieMrsgnomieover 5 years ago
I’m down

Digging this story. I liked your others also. I’ll be disappointed if you don’t finish this, it’s gonna be a good read

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Slow start

It’s a slow build, but the character build is very captivating. Nico has sensitivity, and Thomas is curious enough to pursue the little thoughts in his head. They have a close connection that needs to be explored. I like these boys. Let’s see how this unfolds. Complicated characters like these can be so surprising. Thank you.

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