All Comments on 'Thomas and Niko Ch. 10'

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1crazydude1crazydudeover 5 years ago
More please!

Finally a little more action. Hope it gets hotter and heavier from here on out.

uniliveuniliveover 5 years ago

Oh boy, great chapter again. I can really relate to both of them...poor Thomas. My mum got sick, I was 16 and died when I was 19 so Im glad I had enough time to tell her I was gay and to be old enough to feel able to tell her. I did have a girlfriend too when I was like 15/16 but then with my first boyfriend, it wasnt as complicated as it seems to be for Niko ans Thomas, thank God. I can't wait to see how their relationship progresses, Im guessing they ll eventually have to come out to their girlfriends, family.... Oh and my boyfriend's Asian so if it's anything like with his family for thomas, then good luck to him lol it's all good now though...but I'm sure she still wants him to get married deep down... Arg... Ps: yeah, they finally had sex! Great read thank you

flamingnicoflamingnicoover 5 years ago

I've binge read this entire story in the past hour and can't commend you enough for your writing style. Niko's narrative is stunning and despite the relatively short chapters you've managed to give so much depth to the characters and make them really likable which I hardly EVER find. Can't wait to read more, man.

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