All Comments on 'Thorn Ch. 23-27'

why does it seem like luna and thorn have the halves of a story and need the others half to finish, but don't know it?

This is so captivating. I should be doing chores but here I am unable to resist your story. Great job.

I loved every word of this part of the story. Can't wait to read more.

Redlion - not sure if that is good or bad for you but you are right aspects of the story certainly are coming to light and if certain players talked to each other they would be close to figuring it out

Naughtykitten - thank you I'm writing what I think will be the final submission for this story at the moment, I hope to get it through in a couple of weeks - but as we know sometimes the story takes on a life of its own .... Though the next story is now consuming my thoughts I am focusing on completing this one

So good