All Comments on 'Thorny Rose Ch. 02'

Great chapter 2! Now I am waiting with bated breath for chapter 3!!!

great plot, great pace...

really looking forward to part 3

Ok so you got me hooked! waiting for the next chapter.

Really great story and writing. I amy so drawn in that you have written a set of believable characters. While Rose's Mom is by no means the presidnet of the PTA, she is not slut of the week either. She is like so many women who derives her sense of worth from the validation of a man, so any man will do. And while Dales' folks seem Ozzie and Harriet Nelson perfect, his Mom wants to gossip but has compassion enough to realize her son is becoming a man and doesn't try to browbeat or forbid him into staying away from Rose. His Dad remembers being a horny teen but can see his son really cares for this girl, no matter how damaged she is. Like I said a really great story, well written. 5*s. Cant wait for the nest chapter.

Oh my god. I need chapter 3!!!

An exciting, suspenseful story, well written; it grabs you from the first paragraph and you can't let go. I can't wait for the next chapter. Good job, Jay!

I'm hooked next chapter PLEASE

Oh man I've just been hooked since the beginning and now I'm dying to find out what happens next. Really great story, doesn't seem like an erotic story but rather a thriller of some sorts.

Man hd me hooked up frm thw beggini hope to see chptr 2 soon

Great story so far, can't wait to read the sequel. 5 stars

Enjoying the story and the criminal element is like a true situation - must ask; "Is it ?"