by Malice2
I got a chuckle from it, it was sad in parts and the scene in the park was wicked hot, M! Think I'll have a look see at your other stuff. :D
You're an amazingly talented writer. Your stories are not only hot but are filled with great details and truly genuine characters. It's pretty inspriring how Doug dragged himself back from the brink and rebuilt his life.
I'm also a big fan of your other story, Subway Angel. That story was so perfect and so beautiful. While a part of me is glad to know that things worked out well for Doug, why did Ricky have to turn out to be such an asshole?
I think I would have liked this story much more if it had been a stand-alone and not a continuation. After I finished reading Subway Angel, I imagined I was reading about the start of a long, wonderful and fulfilling relationship. I'd rather not have found out what a selfish prick Ricky is, especially since Doug probably saved his life when they first met.
please tell me you are not a gay man, because i think i love you[:
this story was amazing.
you fully developed the characters in less than half a page and you had an incredible plot, not just some one dimensional smut.
AWESOME!
God you are an amazing write. Love this story and shared it with some friends. Keep write............
This is perhaps the weirdest truly romantic story I've ever read. Such a life ain't my cup of tea at all, but the author makes it in its own way a visit to genuine devotion, not just gay sex, but caritas (Greek for "generous love"). You want to run naked through the pouring rain and then make love in the mud, I'll just sit over here and watch, OK?
Nice story. Reminds you that poverty is just another challenge to be hurdled. I really like Marlo's character.
what happened b/t ricky and doug??? and how did he wind up homeless, didnt he have a job???