All Comments on 'Threat of Foreclosure Ch. 04'

But lots of grammar, punctuation, and syntax error. Honestly, there were enough to distract me and disrupt the flow of the story. If you aren't using one, I would suggest that you use an editor. I like the way you wrote Kate and Ken in to the story. Looking forward to more...

Other than LESBIAN....far too much 'hetero' for a 'lesbian' story