by SexyLi
You story sucks. In fact, I hate when people write stories using "you" constantly...it's irritating. This story isn't even worth reading
Mr anonymous in the USA. You said it ain't worth reading, but you read it!!!! If you are gonna criticise, at least have the balls to leave your name.
I liked it!!!
the story wasn't bad, but I have to agree with the first pc that writing with you can get annoying. Try a different person and the story would be fantastic.
While this story got me hot, I was left wanting more. I think it could use some more variety. With three guys banging her, they probably could've been a lot more inventive than just fucking her pussy. I cum hardest fantasizing about cocks simultaneously stuffing me in my cunt and ass, if that helps any. Still, your story got me pretty wet...