All Comments on 'Three Friends'

The combination of innocence and sexiness is outstandingly effective. Please write more stories along these lines.

I gave this story the 5 it deserved. I loved all the emotion and of course the sex was totally hot as well. Like the other person who commented said, this story is a great combination of sexiness and innocence. Please, write more. We need more awesome writers like this on this site.

Threesomes are just not my thing, and I don't know how I came to be reading this, but the innocence and humour of it made up for my lack of interest in the subject matter generally: well done

Excellent writing and plenty of detail. I like the way you built the story to its eventual "climax." Nicely done.

Normally not into this but this was probably the most comfortable 3 some act I have ever read. The excellent writing was a strong interest in it as one would imagine.

Thanks

Don't get me wrong - I really liked this story. But you have a continuity problem - for me, at any rate. When Scott first drops his briefs, you say 'I didn't really have much to compare it with, but it looked pretty nice to me, anyway.' Later, you say 'Actually, I like doing this to men – at least I had the few times I'd done it...' Now, that isn't technically inconsistent - your voice character could have sucked cock in the dark, as you say she'd had her breasts felt but only while wearing night clothes.

But it feels to me as though you hadn't really got a clear picture in your mind of quite how inexperienced your voice character was, and it sort of drifted as you were writing. One of the keys to successful story telling is not jarring your reader's willing suspension of disbelief, and you don't want to get into a situation where your reader is thinking 'hang on, didn't she just say...?'

Sorry for the criticism. There is so much in this story to like. It's very gentle, innocent, and loving. I really liked it.

I enjoyed your story. It was erotic and seemed sincere. The description was great and how all three really loved each other made the story believable.

Excellent piece.

This Writer's three characters are so well written it's as if you are there. A couple introduces their friend into their marriage situation in a gentle and loving way. Highly entertaining - and yes - Hot!

Nice threesome story. I wasn't sure where it was going for awhile, but it worked out OK in the end (pun intended). Great story.

Not in the least bit dirty, A super lasting manège à trois

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