All Comments on 'Three Friends Make an Unusual Deal'

by SweetVibes

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Excellent!

This is one of the best stories I've read on here in weeks. Ignore the negative comments from the idiots. They are all tiny cocked losers that get off on sending their nasty comments. This was a well-written story and I really hope you follow it up with another story about the next deal these 3 friends form. Maybe a good dp, although that would be tough to keep it a secret from the wife. Great job!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 14 years ago
Good story,fast and to the point

Rachel probably knew from the start that the cock she had in her pussy wasn't her husband's.

She will want some more of that cock, and suggest that he does what he did to her at the cabin again soon.

Thanks for the good story.

The PackThe Packabout 14 years ago
Loved the story

I also loved the way it seems to have wound up some of the wankers with the negative comments. It's a story you twats!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Nope

there isn't a woman alive that would mistake a mans cock that is twice her husbands size while having sex. Give me a break.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
more I hope

well I for one enjoyed it for what it was, a good erotic story, and hope there's more to come, theres plenty of life left in this story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Tsk tsk

You should be doing your homework instead of writing this trash. I would hate to see you have to repeat the eight grade.

SweetVibesSweetVibesabout 14 years agoAuthor
Bravo

Great story. What amazes me is the complete idiots that make comments. Take for example the comment titled "Tsk Tsk". OK you f-ing idiot, it's the "eighth grade", not the "eight grade". But, for a total loser like yourself, you would probably not know that since you never made it past "third grade" or "three grade" so you can understand.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
It's fucking amazing

how readers are more concerned about the opinion voiced by others then the actual story itself. What's it to you what others think, it's their opinion, voice yours and don't concern yourself about others. I'm almost certain that this author would rather have comments directed at his story and his ability to communicate with the reader. Does it make you feel superior or macho knocking down others? Author, this wasn't a bad read, well written, original, but a little unrealistic, it's very doubtful that men can pull the wool over their wives like these guys did in the story. I think wives would have detected the difference in behavior. However it's fiction, erotic and entertaining so some things can be overlooked. Thanks for the read. ML

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Great Story Keep it up!!!

Hey

Don't listen to haters. It was a great story and really hot. I hope you continue the story I'd love to read what happens next. Keep up the great work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
WOW

I must say, a woman would know a cock that is not her's especially if she's married to it. Well that's what my wife says. Nonetheless WE love your story. I mean a STORY. Do you get it numb-nuts out there??

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Deal

While I would love the idea to have happened to me I’m sure my wife would not like it to happen to her. I’m positive that she’d like the sex , she wouldn’t like the deal.

imhaplessimhaplessalmost 2 years ago

Ridiculous; so why did I give it a 5?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Why is that story for another day and what about the change in his wife's pussy, and why did they video the 3 wifes, and who keeps the videos?

I think they do it again this time from the luck of the cards turns, turn out, exactly as it had before so that the other two keep getting the pussy.

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