by a_decent_fellow
A very clever and highly entertaining read that was pretty hot as well. Thank you - I look forward to July.
It would be nice if the family knew that sexual things going on among them and they just tease each other about it. Also the ladies will become more casual as they just sits carelessly in their porch a with legs casually spread showing their parted pussy lips.
I cannot wait to see where things go from here. So many possibilities beyond July 4. It sounds like Sunshine will have her home to herself for the summer with Princess at the camp. I am sure something at home will break down for one of them....it always does.
Unless there is a chapter 2 that expands the relationships here, this isn't an Incest/Taboo story. This is a series of Erotic Encounters. It might be exciting to have Grandma, Mom and the Little Princess sexually involved with each other as well as Johnny, but I don't see how that can happen under the rules of the camp or the confines of the trailer. Still, I enjoyed the story. I was just a little disappointed it was mislabeled.
Loved the way you handled the sex. Sharon did not want to make it seem like an affair and only gave hand job as a reward for helping. Kristin needed a man she could trust for nothing more than pleasure. Johnny had always respected her when she was young and treated her like a daughter. Nicki could sense that and knew that her mother deserved some "love without commitment". Nicki wanted someone that would respect her and give her what she wanted. I am glad you did not have her give her virginity to Johnny on their first meeting.
I hope you add another chapter with all four sharing love and tenderness. Then you will be a legitimate incest/taboo.
I liked the story but I think it should have been listed in the Mature category as he was older than the mother and daughter and the grandmother was older than him.
AND I HOPE THERE IS A CONTINUANCE SOMEWHERE DOWN THE PIPE, PLEASE! IT WAS A REALLY GOOD STORY, REALLY!
I apologize for placing this story under the wrong category. I don't think Literotica will let me go back and re-categorize it once it is published.
I liked the story a lot, though no incest. It could go that way very easily though... maybe in chapter 2?
Super story, very nice and tender and I hope you feel like writing another chapter or two. Left me wanting more, like grandmother, sometimes one wants experience more than potential.
even though I have reservation over his use of the phrase "love nest" and the fact that he was married, I really liked the story and I feel you do a lot more with it in the sequel.
Except for the trite and overused references to genitalia and ejaculate, this was a thoroughly enjoyable story. The characters had distinct and credible personalities, each attractive in her or his own way. The plot was simple, but different. And the sexy parts were well-described, tender and hot. I'm adding my vote for a part 2+. Great job!
good handling of the few sex scenes and thoughts. Just thought is was strange not to fix water heater 1st night. also people at a nudist resort go nude.