- BDSM
- Three Hot Days
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Click hereMatron had been invited by both Claire and me but was introduced as an old friend of my family. If anybody wondered where my family was, they didn't ask.
At the reception, all of the presents were placed ostentatiously on a large table for everyone to see. Like large weddings, it is not a practice I approve of much, but Claire's mum wanted it and who were we to disagree? She had already compromised on numbers, and it was no big deal. It was her day too; her only daughter was getting hitched.
Matron had placed her present on the table in a long red box tied up in a white ribbon.
"Open it when you are alone," she said cryptically.
Much later, in the honeymoon suite, we did just that. Inside the box, was a long dark punishment cane with a red leather handle. With it was a note and I read it aloud to Claire.
"To Malcolm and Claire,
At your wedding, I wanted to give you something for you both to remember me by. This is something for you, Malcolm, to endure and you, Claire, to enjoy. I hope by now you'll have learned how to use it.
Best wishes
Rose Lavington (Matron)"
Claire smiled and turned to face me.
"Now about those three women that you fucked whilst I was away in Canada," she said.
Fuck! She wasn't even planning to wait until my birthday.
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* This is the opening line of the poem, This be the verse, by the English poet, Philip Larkin (1922 -1985)
- COMMENTS
TheDokabout 12 hours agoAuthorThank you for your politely put feedback. I have no intention of deleting it. If you take the time to read my other feedback you will see I normally leave negative comments posted. They are only removed when they are both RUDE and anonymous
Anonymous1 day agoYou laid out so many conditions to reviewing your story that I’m quite sure that you will delete these comments as you appear to only want praise rather than criticism.
Firstly, the story is well written with decent spelling and grammar.
Secondly, the storyline is disturbing and unpleasant.
Finally, I’m really trying be fair, however, the main characters would benefit from therapy. For anyone to suggest that they genuinely love another but inflict such pain, coldly, deliberately and with such
malice and obvious sexual enjoyment is perverted and not erotic.
This will doubtless go unpublished, however, I feel that writers who will only accept sycophantic feedback, should occasionally receive genuine critique.
Campus778 months agoI've never been a fan of corporal punishment but this tale was so well done that I completely understood the emotional needs for both the giver and taker. As usual I love your happy endings. The only difference for me from your other stories was I didn't vicariously become one of the characters. I was a voyeur to the story. Thanks!
Anonymous9 months agoI am posting anonymously but that only makes me a lurking lauder. I enjoy much of your work, finding it highly
erotic although far too intense for anything I could endure, even when I was much younger. But that is the vicarious thrill. The resulting sex is electrifying, reading and imagining. Thanks for your writing. Hope to read
more from you as the mood strikes you.
xzg_ltrtc9 months agoWhile those caning and spanking stories aren't my premier choice this on was extremely well written and nice to read. 5/5
