All Comments on 'Three in the Morning'

by fieryjen

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amber464amber464over 18 years ago
really enjoyed the shower scene

the only comment that i would say is negative, is the use of the same word over again, when you were describing the vibrator, it would have been more descriptive to use a different word each time, rather than "thing". some of your other descriptions were quite exquisite and i enjoyed the tense feeling that you created. very good.

lancewannabelancewannabealmost 18 years ago
showers.... Ahhhh!

LOVE shower scenes. The fact that he took you somewhat roughly is exciting, and erotic. Thanks for the imagry!

AvoidingRealWorkAvoidingRealWorkover 15 years ago
Raw sexual energy

Erotic and full of lustful anticipation. Wonderful story!

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