All Comments on 'Three Square Meals Ch. 097'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Love this chapter!

Ravey19Ravey19about 1 year ago

What has Jade just spotted, could it be a nymph? Some readers are too critical but I'm really enjoying this story. 5⛤

Michael56SmithMichael56Smithabout 1 year ago

--- John and the Girls explore a strange new world, ... this is a big part of what I love about reading Science Fiction stories, ... the seeing of new worlds, ... Jade makes a discovery that will change their lives, ... ;-) TTFN

ranec1ranec111 months ago
Mean As!!

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"Sorry, I couldn't help myself!"

found my profile yeha!!!

onecuriousreaderonecuriousreader7 months ago

its actually disappointing to think, just how often john's approach to being dominant, is really just a conflated form of obstinance.. the romantic scenes.. are really mushy now.. and are feeling like filler between great fighting and fucking.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

at this stage of the storyline different topics comming to my thoughts: first John - while all his girls embraced their psychic gifts and training what they can effective use, John is slacking out totally. He did nothing for his own development beside armor plating, rings and an coloured bird. Even with his shields everyone else got it faster/quicker. In the astral plane fights he always waits totally braindead, doing nothing... he seemed like the absolute looser, promising the girls to always protect them, but doing nothing. Beside swordmansship he had no training at all and even his girls are now better at combat after a few months. No development from Johnnyboy. // secondly, how will he live for enernity and having a big family? All his girls and mothers of his children will live for ever and they will all see their own children outgrow and die? Or - are the children supposed to aquire their own harem to live longer too - and they will see their own children die? I will keep reading this great biblical story.. Thanks to the Author Teffler for publishing that story here, i am flirting with an Patreon account to buy&support the work.

Cosmo5049Cosmo50496 months ago

Finally Faye gets her body! And what a body it is! 5' tall, perky B cup and purple. A very nice change from the 'perfect' form of his battle ready harem. Now don't mess her up.

Michael56SmithMichael56Smith4 months ago

Mysteries, aggressive fish people, and Irillith will soon be snooping through a Brimorian Battleship's data archives, ... Faye, with her new Avatar body, has really gotten the hang of driving John crazed from lust, ... I still want John and Dana to fix her up with an armored suit of her own, ... and there still has been no one who has gotten word to John regarding the massive Kintark invasion force heading for Terra, .... and our lovely emerald Nymph has discovered something, major, ... and John doesn't know how to help Edraele through this newest emotional minefield, ... and only a couple more chapters until the incredible #100 milestone chapter (a big space battle maybe?), .... ;-) ttfn

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

A brilliant story.

What an amazing imagination you possess.

I have been reading science-fiction for over 50 years, and I would have to say that this saga has been a most entertaining experience.

You definitely have a glorious future as a writer, my friend.

– Vader

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Please see my Patreon page for the current progress on Three Square Meals. (I usually announce it here in the comments on the last chapter too!) https://www.patreon.com/user?u=3814558 I've added empire maps, as well as pics of the ships, guns, gear, and girls! *** ...

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