All Comments on 'Three Strikes Ch. 14'

I really enjoy reading the story from Shane's point of view. I find it more reveting for some reason. I'm sure these two will have a happy ending and I'm looking forward to reading how and when it will happen. And btw, loved the threesome :p

There is one thing that reigns supreme in this situation and sums it up. There are two sides to every story. Donovan needs to choke up and swallow that GDamn pride, be an adult, and do this the right way. Listen. I always pressed hard on my boys to do the right thing. In this case, Donovan needs to back up just a bit. Yes, Shane messed up. People do that. Shane is also “damaged goods”. His Dad, and something traumatic involving “wake up sex”. But, there’s this thing we have, something called forgiveness. Shane is still batshit crazy in love. Donovan still has a longing for Shane. I just love both of these characters, so something good must come from this. I so much enjoyed the outing Donovan got from the kids, so funny, honesty revealed in the innocence of children. I wait with great expectations of the next chapter. This is such a fun series. Thank you. JP

Please, tell me there is another chapter coming SOON!

Desperately waiting for the next chapter!

MrsGnomie, any news when we could expect the next chapter would be welcome. Love the story and curious how you will incorporate the threesome. That strange threesome...

I know it’s the holidays and all, but please can we get the next chapter???

Anon & Alycakes6

The next chapter is pending...just waiting for approval. Actually, all the chapters are pending and hopefully will be posting two days apart until the story is completed!

I know the threesome is weird and awkward, but it’s suppose to be since it’s nit sex with Shane.

Hooray! I’m loving this story so much. You have actually inspired me to start writing a story of my own :)

This is awesome! Best comment ever. This is exactly how I ended up writing my first story.

It's Shane genuinely trying to make things work and Donovan has already moved on and slept with his besties for me

Hated the obnoxious threesome. It was gross and awkward and disrespectful and a complete a total shit in the face to Shane! Nothing can excuse, explain or justify it. It was as sleazy of an asshole move on Donovan’s part as anything I can think of. It’s amazing to me how one little scene and decision can ruin the entire story. He’s selfish, thoughtless, and frankly just a huge asshole!

I can't believe that the three-way plays any part in the decisions to be made. Water under the bridge, other commenters. The heat and pace of this dictates that doesn't carry weight. Conversation, sure. Weight? Doubt it. Sometimes sex is for the healing properties, not the dramatic effect.

Dnsontn,

Well, you sure are believing big time that the threesome is causing a bigger mess than it should be after reading the next chapter, don't you?