All Comments on 'Three Strikes Ch. 17'

I need a sixth star!!!!!!

Fantastic chapter!

Great chapter. Love the energy between them.

You always know to surprise, MrsGnomie. Fantastic chapter, as was the previous one. You have me smiling and crying at the same time. Can’t wait to continue reading. Oh wait, there are no more chapters 😩.

that was really sweet. i'm glad they are back together and I'm looking forward to reading the end of the story! Will you update colin and charles btw too? Keep it up!

Thanks everyone, for the kind words.

Yes, I’m actually close to finishing a chapter for SYWM 💥

Great Great story

What a great chapter. So well done, because, it reflects real life. The strongest of people can be broken. We all need to be checked from time to time. It’s part of life to have to have a few things pointed out to get us back in line. We are all fallible. When Donovan was falling apart with Shane, I felt it so strongly. I’ve been there. So glad it is so far in my past. The physical connection afterward, so awesome. When that shameful pride is finally swallowed, one can truly choke on it. Thank God if you have a rock like Shane to hold you up then. At the beginning Shane seemed like the turd, well, friends and neighbors, he could be my knight in shining armour any day. Isn’t forgiveness a wonderful thing? We all must give and receive forgiveness to get to the best parts of living. Mrs. G., this was a great turn in the story. Thank you. JP

This story keeps getting better...can't wait till it is finished so I can read it again from beginning to end......

Where is the new chapter? I thought they were all submitted and would be posting every two days?

They were. I guess there was something wrong with chapter 18? It had broken code or something. Anyway, I didn’t realize it right away, so it took me a minute to resubmit, but it should be posting soon

This is a great series. Can’t wait for the next chapter

What happened to the new chapters? :'(

Mrsgnomie, have they figured out what happened with Ch. 18? Will it be posting soon?? [I may or may not be checking several times a day. ;-) ]

Donovan best be apologising to nelly in the next chapter or ima be mad/sad/disappointed !!

Loving the story so far otherwise xx

I'm so fucking confused! So we finally had a huge breakthrough, Donovan finally melts down and gets real. They both confess their love. I'm fairly certain that they did! Shane forgave Dipshit, they made love numerous times in the night, and still he doesn't know if they are together or where they stand! WTF does it require a lightening bolt! Of course its about time for another huge heartbreaking disappointment to be written into the story so who fucking ever know with this writer! I find most of the chapters nothing more than frustrating depressing torture!

Anon 1 year ago,

It's not your fault that you are failing really badly at reading, and being shallow as a person too.

First of all, think about the mess Donovan created thus far. Trashtalking a lot on Shane's back when he doesn't have context, making huge assumptions and causing immature fights, ignoring Shane's trauma as he fucks him when he's fast asleep, and then knowing that weird threesome scenario.

You must be reallll shallow if forgiveness sex is enough to waive it all away and go "love overcomes everything!" Be so confused for the rest of your life.

And more to add, Anon 1 year ago,

If you bothered reading, it's supposed to be a major character growth for Donovan to realize that he needs to do more for relationship rather than just sex with a lot of crying. Too bad you won't ever realize that either.

Also, a bit disappointed that no one commented on Calvin's miraculous recovery. I get that the power of sex in adult stories are so powerful, but actually caring for the characters do not decrease your masculine or feminine traits nor your status as an adult story reader, you know.