All Comments on 'Three-Way Freeway'

and you are one very talented writer. I loved the way the storyline went back and forth between the phone call and the Kathy-Jill scene, ratcheting up the sexual tension each time. You can come play in the street outside my house any time you want.

This is a story of very sexy frustration playing itself out in what could be real life. It is terrific. Very exciting and stimulating.

Nookiehunter

For your sophomoric story, this is a suprisingly clever, and well written little tale. I enjoyed reading it, and found it to be very erotic.

Well done, you have a lot of talent, I'm looking forward to reading your next piece.

Well crafted and very erotic. Great job darlin'. The voyeur and f/f sex aspects were deliniated to a T. Good luck in the contest.

Let me just say that this was one hot story! The next time I get stuck in traffic I will remember your story.

Great set-up, funny, well written. I love the way you told the story in dialog form. Not always easy to carry off - you have to have a really good ear for it otherwise it sounds terrible. This was wonderful! Great contest entry!

Such a fun & sexy little romp!

Congrats on a well written story. Loved your use of dialogue which is always (to me) the best part of the story. Best wishes in the contest!

Great story and beautifully written. I just lovd the whole way it worked. It was almost as if you stole the fantasy right out of my head. Great work and I'm looking forward to more stories from you.

I choose "100" only because the scale doesn't go any higher. This was one of the hottest stories I have ever seen on the site! I could visualize everything.

How about a follow-up...where the girls and guy meet up at home...??

Nice high level of heat and cleverly played out in almost all dialogue. The suspension of belief level is a bit high - but who cares! Wild things happen in the heat of the moment, and about anything is possible.

Fun and definitely hot. You've got a good narrative voice and playful sense of humour that makes this a very enjoyable read. This was an an imaginative venture - using the phone gave you a bit more to play with in the story line. I'm sure there are more than a few people who wished that sort of thing happened when they're trapped in gridlock - it would definitely cut down on road rage when they're distracted like that. ;)

Getting stuck in traffic will make me think of your story and the awesome turn-on from reading it. You are great babe. Please more!!!

That was indeed hot!

Lovely combination of heat and humour. And fine use of dialogue. Nicely done.

such imagination, such detail w/a perfect level of tease... 210% perfect... almost too awesome not to be a real story... I've driven that route... LOL

I liked the originality of this story. Also it was quick and to the point but wasn't rushed - just like a short story should be.

Wow, what a ride! I can't wait to read more of your stories. This was so hot.

What a lovely fantasy! Another well written stroker. Kudo's kiddo!

You certainly have a gift for keeping the reader up.

Paris Waterman . . . the_panda@hotmail.com

that is, if you care to drop me a line.

All I can say is wow! That's one of the hottest stories I've read. Plot was great, writing was great; nice, shotrt and to the point! Good job!

What a fun story to discover. Your erotic writing is very hot. I felt like I was in the back seat looking over their shoulders. I think I could even feel the moisture an smell the wonderful smell of an excited pussy. Very stimulating. Great job !!😊