by Rachel_Riley
Wow! Great story. I liked the spontaneity and realism of it and was glad they didn’t fuck (yet). And good for shy little Scotty who held out the longest and got to paint moms face with his seed. Well done.
Wow, that was super impressive. The best thing I've read on here in a while. I hope there are more chapters to come.
Great story telling and always nice to get Mom’s perspective. It’s so steamy to imagine how she will describe her sons cumming deep inside her.
Please continue with this story. It's so rare to have great story where mom has two sons and it's written from her perspective.
Amazing job!
Lots of delicious moments. Beautiful teaser of an opening paragraph, then enough teasing exposition to make the end extra-special. Delicious details and psychology.
You could of added more. This is the base of the story. What happened next...