All Comments on 'Three's Company'

by dylanmurphy

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NutsterNutster7 months ago

The level of non-consensual play and violence was off-putting. That is not how you treat women that you just met.

racfguyracfguyabout 9 years ago
The 'guy at the end of the bar'...

was an asshole.

GagamamaGagamamaabout 11 years ago
A Trio in Triage?

Much nicer, Dylan. This goes beyond the simple mechanics and begins to pick up steam--er, steamy emotion.

A suggestion? Edit the last paragraph so it reaads, "Caterina and I never found our nameless benefactor again. But there were others. Quiet evenings and good books were left far behind."

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

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