All Comments on 'Threesome Vacation Surprise'

Very sexy and fun story. I'm definitely saving this one to read again.

That shower scene was definitely a nice touch.

5-stars.

Great story! Hoping to read more about them…. Love to see sister move in with them, and both women soon pregnant by him.

This was so well written and erotic.

Hot story really enjoyed it :D

Amazing story

Hope it doesn't destroy the marriage

5 stars. Part 2 Liv moves in.

Both ladies get pregnant. LIFE IS GREAT

Great build up.

Please continue this story.

Need part 2. His wife and sister were lying about being on birth control. And he knocks both of them up.

Very hot, sexy well written story and very erotic

Some say all's well that ends well. Others say it's the journey, not the destination. Something tells me you'll get better scores from the first group, as the story leading up to the climax was not that great. Unfortunately, I'm in the latter group and was disappointed for most of the story.

Say sultry one more time…

This was a great story. Please take it further. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Very erotic and excellent build up in the story. Wish I had a sister…

Damn! Hot as fuck! I loved it and left me wanting more….MUCH MORE! I also wish this site would steer the reader to similar stories. But well done….maybe more chapters?

WONDERFUL story! Please make a part 2

Very Good!

Hot Hot Hot! Liv moves in with them, and soon hubby/brother knocks them both up. Living as a loving threesome for ever more. Five stars! And thank you for it.

Very, very hot! the various positions and participants were on fire and drew me and my imagination into the couplings.

You need an editor, but you do not need much help with your ideas and plot!

Very hot, looking forward to more if you have it planned or are inspired!

The build up to the actual threesome was too exaggerated. I actually became so bored with it that I stopped reading for a couple of days before I finally came back to finish reading this. For that reason alone I should vote a three on this one. But the Brother/Sister/Wife three-way is a favorite of mine, so I'll give you a 4/5.

This is why I read incest stories!

Good story. Can't wait for part two!

It may not be with my wife and sister....but it will be with my wife and her girlfriend we will be a triad with each having my child

Sorry, but this didn't get me going. The fisrt two thirds of the story was lame and the last was average, at best.

What happened when they got home?

As Monty Python would say: “And now for something completely different “ Not as taboo as parents & a daughter, but pretty close. Looks like the wife was the main driver in this one. Hope she knows she may have started something which could go in a number of directions. Loved the dance scene in the club. And then the wife urging him to Fuck his sister ( who is in the pill👍). Will be interesting to see if you write a chapter 2. Thanks

The story was great. Please Please continue it. This needs a part 2.

Parts two three and four required please. Very hot characters and great story telling. Thank you for writing.

Interesting premise. The writing was repetitive and the male character lacked any unique qualities. An editor would definitely help this hot fantasy become a full realized story. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Hairy pussies would have gotten you a 5 rating instead of a 4.

Premise was decent, but the scheming and the way the women acted felt like they were far more into each other than into the may they supposedly both loved. For me, that massively detracted from the story. 3*