All Comments on 'Threesomes'

No doubt you'll get some hate mail, but you tell a good tale and I'll keep reading.

Great story, good solid characters. Hot!

Not bad but I felt like I was reading a clinical report. If this story were read out loud, it would be in droning monotone. Yes, I'd like more…more passion, more sex details, more juicy dialogue! Oh, and yes, more punctuation. Your lack of it is rampant! ***

Tell us more of this erotic tale. Love the bi mmf

This was about as exciting as listening to someone announce a long volley in a woman's tennis match. I don't think it would turn on a nympho.

Stop reading the fucking story!

Rapid why don't you just ask her to be her proofreader instead commenting on punctuation? Oh, as a bisexual I thoroughly enjoyed the story. Usually a lot less passion between men than women just so you no straight Rapid. Mostly just about sex some hot kissing not a lot else.

I REALLY READ THE STORIES AND FOUND HUSBAND AND HIS FRIEND FUCK HIS WIFE BUT WE MOM DAUGHTER AND HER FRIEND SANJU HE FUCK MY MOM AND ME IN SAME BED AND YOU BELIVE MY MOM BECAME PREGNANT MANY TIMES BUT SHE MAKE IT ABORT. BUT NOW SHE TOLD IF SHE BECAME PRAGNANT SHE WILL GIVE BIRTH TO A BABYAND GIVE IT TO ME

FOR MORE SEND E MAIL

sanjay2008_99@rediffmail.com

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nisha g parakh

.......the way your mind works. I really like your writing style and I really like your glasses. Any editing mistakes are a minor issue.

Call me :-).

give me more!

So well written and realistic

Really enjoyed the story. One day hoping my wife takes me as her bottom.

hot hot hot, well-described and really enjoyable to read. More, please!