All Comments on 'ThRobbie'

iOh man... the Young And The Restless have nothing on you! Boy, this story is HOT, HOT, HOT... and you have to trot, trot, trot that pen of yours out again and write some more, more, more. This tale isn't done by a long shot... and probably has more mileage than that any soap opera yet! It's not the story itself that gives it life... but "your style" of the use of cliche into grammatical drama with a well balanced dose of emotional punch! Your writing and editing is also very good... it reads so easy.

What you've given us to read so far is only the beginning of a truly very good story. It needs more chapters... many more. You'll see! You're one of a few at the top of my list... and I'll be looking out for further posted installments written about this adventure. In the meantime... good luck and write, write, write.

I hope that they get together soon

Thanks

It was really hard for me to get into this story , It's written in gangsta style type writing ? like colored street slang or something . If it was written in plain English it would be awesome

teasing isn't my cup of tea.they did everything but fuck and why not fuck her that what she wanted.

Stopped reading part way through. Who said what to who, what part was in your head, too many directions at the same time. It's like my little brother telling a story when he's realy excited.

I found the story very hot and exciting, keep up the good work!

Eldridge aka stevraygoran aka srahhh aka annanova aka myriad others.

Same shit different name/day/pov.

Bubble gum porn. So shallow you'll stub your toe testing the water.

humorous, and these two characters just need to get it on, he at least needs an hj daaaamn, also no anal crap please

Really liked the storyline. Don't switch voices too much...otherwise, I totally got off on it!

...the English translation of this story to come out.

Why does every story have to have a 10 inch cock? I have decided that it is because the writers must have minuscule packages themselves.

i read this and was laughing more than being turned on. oh my god so funny! the cock talking to him, lol! oh and please let someone edit the story before you post it. i also agree about the other comment, 10 inch cock, monster cock ugh please it gets old. i see more parts to this story, when i need a good laugh i'll read more

Great and hot story! Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the awesome work.

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Did'nt ever have to pee?

holy shit i was absolutely amazed with your chapters good sir i didn't get to finish the series yet but i am at chapter six b where the mother takes control and help Robbie i am to this point amazed i have never read any storie that has kept my attention this long and i would just like to thank u sir if u may please lookme up on face book name jeremiah chambers that way u have the power to trust me and not the other way around but once again thank u good sir

to sneak a glance is "peek", not peak. To be pulled tight is "taut" not taught.

I enjoyed the story up to the point where the mother passedout. It appears mother and son do not communicate often nor well with each other. I like stories that are logically developed and with characters that have depth and breadth. Mother and son appear to lack a solid sense of self, are somewhat immature, and psychologically surpressed. Hopefully, this series will improve. Chapter 1 received a 4 star rating because of the preceding.