All Comments on 'Through the Lens'

This story's depiction of infidelity and it's repercussions on the characters involved was hilarious. I have never seen an author have so much contempt and visceral animus towards one of his own characters like SS06 seems to have for Jason Hamsker. Starting with the name, to his pecker size, etc etc. It was amusing to see an author despise his own creation so much.

In real life, Connie could have sued Hamsker’s estate. Like other rappers that have been gunned down, their media sales shot up, earning the estate and record companies millions. But this is Stang’s world so….

Connie was too stupid (threat of one and done, then cheats that evening) and the pile on suffering at the end felt like too much, but as satire it was funny. So not as enjoyable as your regular story but it was still ok.

Connie and Jessica deserved each other.

5 pages of a wimp Rob Delgado. Why stay married to the harpy bitch for so long. All your MCs are weak wimps and cucks

I liked this story and gave it 5 stars. I thought it was funny as hell when the cheating bitch got burned.

Everyone sucks here. The "I was only joking" defense on behalf of Rob was lame as shit. He had no cause to sue her for infidelity - and her lawyer should have pointed out that they had a verbal agreement. Point being - don't say shit you don't mean. I will give Stang some minor credit here, he only pulled 1 of his 3 BTB tropes here. Rob wasn't a sociopathic asshole, Connie wasn't a retard or mentally ill, but she did still get pregnant with the other dudes baby. However, the way he avoided these tropes was to have Rob ghost Connie and for him to welch on a deal they had, which really ruined the story. The story, frankly, would have been better if Rob had just confronted the fact that he lied to Connie about the free pass and dealt with it instead of dismissing it.

Sad Connie, but to leave her just like that, this author is brutal to cheating wives and to be honest mc is not good either, he had plenty chance to introduce her to her idol she would have get it out her system but he did saying all he's not who she thinks he is blah blah, yes what she did was totally wrong but mc is not all sunshine either he could have outright come out saying he met his idol but he didn't sleep with her and he could have introduced her to her idol and let her see how he really was,but he did none. And as usual with this author cheating wife stories he simply run's off with no contact whatsoever until the divorce. The mc should have helped out the ex wife in reaching out to the douche before his dead to atleast pay or support her ex wife not saying it's his responsibility but that's the right thing to do for two years of their marriage.

Paparazzi should be shot.

3 stars - this is just one more crap story, very similar to the 'Feb Sucks' crap storyline.

Meh. Everyone was unlikable or an asshole. Yes Connie had a crappy one night stand. So divorce her. That is the prerogative of the husband, if he chooses. But no confrontation. Just disappears. Leaves her in the poor house. I know they were not married for long and Cinnie had a jealous streak. But he acted like a cowardly asshole. Ick.

I loved this story, it reaffirmed my belief in a just God!

Four very unlikeable characters. Rob was an asshole, Serena was an asshole. The wife was stupid and an asshole, and Jason was an asshole. There were no good guys in this story

Very sad

Rob was an asshole. Yes, his wife has sex with another guy, but as far as she was aware, it was ok. They had given each other permission. He thought it was a joke, but had never informed her of that.

in our state, any children were legally recognized as the fruit of the marriage whether they were the husband's biological children or not. im not sexist but DAMN what kind of shebitch wrote that no man whos wife doesnt have his nuts in a vice would write a dumb ass law like that if you cheat have the lover pay for your damn baby dont make the poor sap who was cursed to be married to you pay for it unless he was abusive then take him for everything he has but other then that or the baby came from rape get the hell out of my house and let the father pay for it

This author has the cheating wife never use protection or the pill and I variably end up pregnant even if a crappy one night stand. I also don't get the husband having zero confrontation with her. He claims to love her heart and soul and then she just disappears. Fine divorce her. But really? Just disappear? Then leave her I the poor house? What state are they in where she gets zero? Again I can understand that he could not forgive her and would divorce. Buy no confrontation? Thar seems weak and unrealistic. And of course she got pregnant. Whatever.

This guy was cold. She deserved the divorce, but given the circumstances, he should have talked with ger and kept her out of the poor house. Yes, she was wrong, but the famous putz did take advantage of her AND it was only once. Too cold!

Another good one. Your stories have a momentum which propels the reader to the end. My only unhappiness is your MC's obsession with Mustangs. Owned one. Wouldn't ever again. Dad was right. FORD trucks, GM cars.

Dang. Stang, you must really dislike Canadians, and hockey. Enjoyed the story. Good times.

I guess I’m more forgiving. The claim was he loved his wife with all his heart and soul. She wasn’t pulling trains and wasn’t a serial cheater. The way she was written was obvious this was the only time she would ever cheat. The agreement, while silly and not binding played a factor, he never had a talk to make it clear it was null and void.

And then he hooks up with the skank who set up his wife to cheat before his marriage was officially over. Hopefully the beauty he quickly came to love with all his heart and soul didn’t pull a devious number on him down the road.

I would’ve given the wife another chance but in any case he was just as big of a sleaze as her in my opinion.

Awwww that was funny 😁

The best advice I ever got from My Lawyer was to just let my Ex and her new Boyfriends was to leave her alone . I did not need any grief from either one of them . Plus they had a nice RO on Me and My Family . 4 Stars on this one as he played it right

The only thing I don't like about this and other like stories, is the husband going quiet and avoiding a face to face discussion with his whore wife. It's just not possible and makes him look weak.

excellent story , thanks .

Way out there, pure comedy fiction. Great for laffs - Thanx, yo bro!

Good story, very entertaining.

What was the title of last weeks story?

Haha, Anon. You serious? When has a stupid juvenile "pass" rate above marriage vows? Even swingers have to keep their affairs a secret because OTHER people can legally accuse them for adultery (violation of marriage vows). What are you? A twelve year old kindergartener? Haha!

Fuck off. They each picked one person they had an automatic pass to fuck. He did nothing to "terminate" their permission/agreement, and knew very well of his wife's selection and infatuation.

If he didn't do anything to cancel their agreement, and if he had been a man instead of a faggot pussy photographer, he would have stopped wifey from going into the private room with the star.

His failure to both inform and to act absolves her of any liability for her actions. You can't make an agreement and then walk away if it goes against you.

What a kunt he was.

Well written from a great author. But sad for me. Connie was just a stupid woman, who was played, she really didn't deserve that..

you can still feel sorry for stupid people.....

bill

5 Stars on this story . One of my Favorites

Awesome, sick of reading stories where all is forgiven and they get back together and live happy.

It's decent, but lacks the humour that your better stories possess.+

5 for you. This is probably one of the best Burn The Bitch (BTB) stories to date. You have raised the bar to the absolute highest level of all the thousands of BTB stories. How any these BTB stories ever ending up in the 'LOVING WIVES' category is beyond comprehension. There is absolutely nothing loving in any of them - only hate, revenge and tragedy. I believe the the BTB stories should be in their own category.

However, the February BTB (sports jock goes down inflames) story and all of it's re-writes or endings are a close second.

Cheating whore got what she deserved!

Felt bad for Connie. She was played.

Payback is a bitch you dumb bitch

Dumb slut...

That was a sad story, but good and well told. There was a lot of immaturity in those characters.

Another good SS06 story with a moronic, slutty, shrew of a wife getting her just desserts.

The comments moaning about Rob being too unforgiving made me laugh. Stangstar explains exactly why Rob took such a hard stance with Connie when she cheated on him:

"I never did get lunch."

I bet Connie is regretting not making her husband that sandwich now...

I got a buzz from reading your line: “the real buzz came from reading some of the truly lunatic responses from the more microcephalic Literotica readership.” It cracked me up in Rochester, NY. (and yup, we’re infected with wasteful Democrat Socialist spending, too. Our just re-elected nitwit female mayor's first name is "Lovely". What's that tell you? You guess it. We're doomed.)

Had to give the story 4 stars. The punch line was anticlimactic because it was obvious long before we got to it.

I know the bitch is suffering, but the bastard she chose REALLY got burned!

a happy and just ending

with their life style.... forget on how to be human, TK U MLJ LV NV

I was angry , I was upset, insert reason for fucking outside marriage here.

There was no need to talk the deal had irrefutably been broken, the decision made talking would be unnecessary noise..

As much as I enjoyed the story, the real buzz came from reading some of the truly lunatic responses from the more microcephalic Literotica readership.

Someone dares to suggest that Robin didn't behave as well as he should by refusing to have any contact whatsoever with the woman he claimed to love after her brief sexual encounter with her hero (a perfectly valid point in my humble opinion) and is met by a torrent of abuse from the next commentator, whose response leaves any semblance of sanity in its wake as he wishes all manner of physical and emotional horror on the heretical bastard (and anyone else it would appear) who doesn't share his particular brand of fanatical misogyny.

I must be growing naive in my old age because I thought that Literotica was a place to read and critique a wide variety of stories, rather than a forum for bigots, morons and lunatics to vent their rage at anyone and anything that doesn't conformed to their seriously fucked up sense of justice and morality.

Silly me.

LA

To start with Robin obviously couldn't wait to get out of his marriage. I figure he was already having an affair with Serena. He sure didn't have any love for his wife! Robin in my opinion was the asshole in this story and what made me laugh.....was the whole story Stang makes out like he is a great guy. Just how do you figure that Stang? To not even talk to your wife once...he must have been just heart broken the poor little asshole. When you think about it he more than likely setup the whole thing. He gets Serena to introduce his wife who he knows is star struck with Hamkser and he knows what Hamkser is like...voila' not hard to put 2 and 2 together! I gave it a 1 because there isn't a 0.

This is my second read of this story and it is still one of my favorites by SS06. The wife had it all, she had a fucking bird's nest on the ground, as the saying goes, and she threw it away, trashed her marriage for a stupid fantasy over some adolescent

punk little shit of a would-be celebrity. The bitch is worthy of no sympathy at all, at least in my opinion. And if the guy found some fabulous looking woman to take the

bitch's place, good for him. Very good story.

but beg for more and see what occurs/ TK U MLJ LV NV

It seems to be an excuse to dole out misery. A small segment of the story about her betrayal and a whole lot of how miserable she was.

Yes Connie was a pain at the start of the story. Then she talked about the agreement she had with her husband about Eva and Jason. I've read in stories where similar agreements have been made and were reluctantly agreed upon and not some chicken shit "I didn't mean it!" you allowed a supposed man of his word to turn into the Jason Hamsker.

Not only did you fail on the Rob character you made Connie and her Lawyer even stupider after Jason was killed he being a rich entertainer must have had money for his heirs. According to you he was DEAD so he couldn't argue against the DNA. The estate would have to account for the money spent and the child would get something. The dead guy may have had debts but, he sold records there should be royalties from records sold played and commercials or movie sales. Or did his recordings get sucked into a black hole. Even Evis and James Brown had debits at the time of their death but, they are making more money dead then they made when they were alive. This story might have been a good idea but, you left too many holes. Rob vs Connie I didn't care about either of them but, her treatment was over the top in a negative way which was too bad. She may have been better off without someone like Rob who with the "I didn't really mean what I said" as a excuse to dump Connie for Serena was poor at best. One other thing "Show Me a beautiful woman and I'm sure you can find someone who's tired of her shit". Serena was no ball of fun either from your description of her so what if she was a virgin. A Bitch is a Bitch virgin or a over protective wife.

Not too many characters to relate to here.

as an excuse to justify voiding the sacred agreement of fidelity and got what she deserved.... cold justice.

Don't get why they arrested the guy who shot Jason when all he did was perform a community service.

Feel sorry for her new born but life's a bitch... as the slut finally learned.

I read some of the comments by bleeding heart candy asses that Ron should have helped her out and, to them, I say, Get your heads out of your asses and take a look at how the real world works. She's on her own because of what she did and so is he. As a result of her betrayal of their sacred vows, Ron didn't and doesn't owe her diddle-e-shit. He's not the Community Chest, Social Services or the Welfare Dept. He doesn't even have to refer to to them, though I'm sure he would, for the sake of her kid. If it was me, I MIGHT give her bus fare to Social Services.

I gave this one 5 stars. For a change, I saw that the lead character wasn't written as a wimp or convinced to consider the acceptance of being cuckolded.

I know she deserved divorce but still felt bad for her.

Pretty catastrophic stupidity on her part. Not having protection was almost worse than cheating on the stupidity scale.

I really felt sorry for the kid. Not the kids fault to have to struggle.

I wish Rob would have helped her a little. Still entertaining and that is what I'm reading for.

All it takes is a little prick from a little dick and she's up the warzoo! Anyway it's only fiction! But close to the truth! Love you all! Bye. Greg. Oh 10 stars = 100 %. Bye.

Rob was a bit too tough on her and her getting pregnant from a tiny dick that hardly penetrated is a bit much.

It's like you started it and knew what you wanted from it... but then realized you had a deadline of first thing in the morning and just RUSHED through most of it.

And here's another fault I have with it... I know people I can see from behind and recognize or see walking at a distance too far to notice features but I recognize them from the way they move... He's been married to her for at least two years... and his CAREER involves visualization... and yet he only recognizes her when he sees her from profile...? He didn't recognize her from just her legs...? I think not.

I guess I also get disappointed when you use your stereotypical apparently "Too stupid to live" wives... it would be nice to have one DO something stupid without actually BEING stupid...

Sorry but on this one I agree ad disagree with you. No she didn't deserve another dime but he could have been a little sensitive to her position at the time. That being said she did not deserve more from him. I've seen single mother's that killed themselves to provide for a child. But she should have had the presence of mind to go for a morning after pill. On another hand to just throw her away like that without even talking to her he could not have loved her all that much to begin with.

I vehemently disagree with KarenE. The stupid bitch (in the story) shouldn't have received shit. I cannot understand these broads that go ga-ga over a celebrity and expect everything to go well if they screw said celebrity and get caught. As to the story -- kudos, SS6. Well written. Cheers!

turns into Zero Reality. TK U MLJ LV NV

and quite depressing

how about some humour and a smile?

I'm somewhat torn.

Yes, she shouldn't have cheated, silly "agreement" or no, and Serena's comment about Rob not using the "agreement" to fuck Eva Mendes should have been a wake up call, and certainly the unthinking way she did it was laughable.

But they DID have that agreement, and silly and old as it was should have bought her SOME consideration, for the sake of the kid if nothing else. Maybe a one-time payment of a couple hundred thousand rather than just $25,000 would be appropriate.

She may have nor been as scewed up as females in you stories but hanging on to a

'free pass" based on a long past agreement then following thru on it certainly placed her up among the worst of them. I liked Serenan's character as she carried it out with dignity and carrying, something not often seen in her chosen field.

This story was extremely well written but I had so much empathy for Connie that I couldn't digest the poor results. Connie definitely deserved a break. She was sweet and innocent and practically raped. She was guilty of being stupid bit not cheating.

My problem with this story was its insulting characterization of my profession. Please SS06, if you ever write about a photographer or photography again, ask me any questions you wish to make it more true to life, I will be happy to correct any misinformation you have of the industry. Your description of what this man did for a living was so unbelievable you could have said he was a martian who took pictures on Saturn and it would have been just as close to the truth as your own portrayal of what a photographer does for a living.

"That's assault," he whined.

"No it wasn't," I said. "That was therapy. If you look in any medical journal they tell you that the way to treat people who are suffering from shock or are behaving irrationally"...........

Absolute pure magic. 5* just for that alone and thanks for the great read.

can be such a bitch.

Well done sad, sad tale. she really messed up, but did she really deserve all that grief and missfortune? sad tale but THANK YOU

Connie was star struck and failed to even know what was happening and failed to react properly - selfish yes but not the same malicious bitch so many are and would almost certainly not have repeated to stupid behavior.

Does that mean she was right - of course not - but she was one of the few who would not have been so likely to cheat again of course the wimp dick got her pregnant which is much more of a deal breaker - but he had already hung her. This one made me think a bit from the stupid wife's side than normal - but that is not enough of course.

Why did you have to pick Corpus Christi? And for the record no one there has a 'Texan accent'.

Sometimes your stories don't appeal to me, but this one had me laughing. Thanks for all your hard work.

I know I haven't read all of your stories, but this is undoubtedly the worst thing you have written that I have read. Better luck this week.

now i know why you told me that the haters get around. this anonymous person wrote a few good stories in the 1800's but now just wants to bash everyone

i enjoyed this one the people that didn't oh well

i say good job

Dab10

So Connie was not good looking as we learned when he took a picture of her before knowing who she was. She also was stupid, bordering on moron, and had no good personality. Still he loved her so much. Did he love her for how much she spent on clothes? ;)

Your stories still show that roughly half the women are morons. That is not realistic. Maybe half of the women is silly but not with sub 70 IQ's.

I think that's the most important thing your otherwise very good stories suffer from.

Stang, I love your stories man but this one seemed a little rushed to me. There really wasn't enough character development. Aside from that, it wasn't too bad. I gave it a 4 but I feel like it could have been a 5 with more added.

It was Jason's baby she would not be poor even though he was killed. The press and publicity around the baby would have had her and the baby on every talk show, and news site known. Plus she could have sold the pictures and told her story and live comfortably ever after. I'm not getting on your case, it's just the OCD kicking in. Good story as usual.

Stang, this story makes it seem like you are in a rut. Same plot, different characters.

Husband & wife are very much in love, wife cheats, hubby divorces wife, wife ends up very poor with a shitty job. Sometimes there's a pregnancy--not hubby's fault, or revenge, or both added in. Why does it seem it's almost always the wife who cheats? Why is the wife usually somewhat uneducated and definitely untalented/underqualified? Connie was starstruck, which made her stupid, which she kind of was to begin with.

All in all, the story seemed very shallow and underdeveloped. You have done MUCH better.

A definite mark of maturity is the ability to see the consequences for one's actions and hopefully the long term consequences also. In this story Connie was very immature for her age first relying on a ancient agreement for a get out of jail card which is never a good idea. Secondly, to get carried away in the moment and have sex with Jason. Later she realizes how short he is (didn't she know that when he stood in front of her and touched her breast ? Plus, she was amazed after the fact that he had such a small cock, she didn't know that before he penetrated her ? Imagine a man below 5' with a small cock who would have thunk it ? Connie goes to a party that her husband frequents for business and there are many of his friends there and she decides to have extramarital sex at the pary and of course it would never get back to her husband---how funcking stupid was that ?

I'll state that if I was not familair with your existing body of work I'd be satisfied with this story but as has been said by others you are becoming slightly repetetive and predictable.

At present the variety seems to be how does hubby find out wife is cheating with a bit of revenge thrown in.

How about not having the wife cheat for once? How about an alternative explanation for her strange behavior i.e spy for foreign country inciting an emotional what do I do about treason, Assasin for hire or just plain I am a serial killer who likes killing people and this is what I am doing?

Maybe - done partly once - Blackmail or out threats against life. this way no plain revenge just rebuilding faith and love to work together in overcoming adversity as wife/ husbands reasons for actions were understandable and acceptable to a percentage of the population.

Just something to send us off on a different track that we do not expect.

I like your writing and Thursday is missing something when you don't write so please continue please just try and grow as an author.

MM13

Your last couple stories have been either lacking or just plain weird. Finally, a true, genuine StangStar story. Great job.

Oh, wait, all your stories are the same. There has been the odd great one but the repetition and same stupid female character is really dull. You are an entertaining writer but the entertainment dies by the inevitable, duplicate ending. At least you don't give into your darkest Cuck fetishes like DQS and his fans. I hear they get group rates at BDSM dungeons.

A new story from StangStar06 and DQS1 on the same day? I just about leap with glee when I saw that. My wife thought I went crazy when she came into the room and saw me dancing. Having said all that, I loved this. A true pleasure to read. Well crafted and fast paced. A thrill to read. She got exactly what she deserved, but I was utterly surprised at how quickly the husband dismissed his wife. It is hard to feel any depth of emotional attachment for a two year relationship.

My favorite line:

"The vodka seemed to make me understand Russians better." Beautiful.

hey, it was a fun read while I sat immobilized by a broken leg... not sure I would have spent the time if I had other things to do... now, I am gonna watch Paladin episodes on utube

I liked this story but it has potential go longer,you left many loose ends.You didn't told Rob's side of tale during and after the divorce from his side and didn't explored any of the other character.Anyways kudos...

When you keep confusing the names, no amount of fancy Mustangs mixed in will fix that. So the mess was a mess before it even got to the "burn the bitch" part of the tale.

Lack of any real development didn't help, so we get 5 dreary pages of close to unemotional drivel.

All writers slip from time to time, no problems with that. But you couldn't possibly have reread this thing and still posted it.

At least you spelled well.

You do sometimes show talent, but remember quality beats volume every time. Try rereading and thinking instead of pumping out 5 page garbage and trying to call that a "short" story.

As is usually the case I enjoyed the story, keep writing and I will keep reading! Thank you

The author and pencil dick are really the same person. Plus the shooter must have written this ?story.

Good story I like ur short stories more than then longer ones

his wife getting gangbanged by half an army unit and the husband finding that "HOT" but a guy wanting a loving "FAITHFULL" wife is not "REALISTIC". What a world, what a world. 5 stars bud.

You write well, we ALL enjoy your imagination, your vision and presentation so - write every week, Thursday mornings are usually a treat.

You never fail to put our minds in the story, relate to the players in the first sense and visualize our actually being there - or - the fly on the wall...All Good!

Thanks!!!

I've enjoyed several of your stories, but this one really doesn't compare well at all. Realistic characters make a huge difference...

That one stupid mistake would get some serious punishment, but not armegeddon. This story follows your regular formula of zero tolerance, but it makes about as much sense as the schools expelling a teen girl for having a midol in her pocketbook. Especially in this story. This wife was your typical airhead with a basically good heart. Therein lies the problem. I go from siding with the husband to getting uncomfortable with his way too aggressive revenge to finally siding with the wife. Robin might have had the happy ending with all the money and the beautry queen, but he was still a schmuck.

And I DO consider the above comment to be constructive.

Sorry...any woman who even considers screwing a guy whose pants are perpetually falling down deserves to end up crying into a wipe-up rag in a diner! The rest is irrelevant. Ask me how I REALLY feel!

Pity about the kid! Hope he or she doesn't grow up with a Canadian accent-ai!

You really dug out the brain dead tossers this time. Sadly this wasn't your best but you are one of the very few authors who are producing worthwhile stories in LW at the moment. May I suggest that you cut down the frequency of your submissions a little or you'll risk mass producing poor tales. As for the brain dead critics - put up or shut up. (or if you must criticise make constructive remarks rather than flame the author)

I have met a few stupid bitches that fucked up their lives by cheating on good men. They are not too bright, and/or they were not raised very well. Morally speaking the the outcome is clear, tie the cheaters to a post and stone her to death. If you don't believe in God and his laws as so many stupid people do not nowadays you are left with science. That means life is all about survival, and the survival of your genetic legacy. A unfaithful wife is a threat to both aspects of your survival. If you cannot trust her sexual fidelity how can you trust her with your money and well being? If she has another man's child your resources are being wasted there as well. Not to leave the interloper out of it, what kind of lowlife fucks up a couples life doing emotional, physical and financial harm just for sex? Like I said tie them to a post and stone them out of existence. We don't need them here.

Your critics can go suck monkey balls. Your formula is tried and true. The world is full of dumb sluts who should be treated the same way. There are certain assholes who you can depend on to say something fucked up. However, they haven't written a damned thing. I wish they would so I could piss on them.