All Comments on 'Through the Side Door Pt. 05'

by Carl_Bradford

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AliceTagAliceTagover 3 years ago

It may be a variation, but its very hot. I enjoyed this work greatly.

I could really identify with willow as I have the same sort of mindset. I hope that we get a story about a similar person at some point where the ending is less happy. Cant have all the stories have a happy end after all. We would loose the wonder of wondering how a tale will end.

Looking forward to your next work

Karen_48Karen_48over 3 years ago

A very hot story. I could easily see you adding to this story or creating a part 2 in which willow meets with Shirley to learn more about the fino status and finally goes ahead and signs one with jacks s the master.

Please keep writing as you have had some really great stories so far.

Jim

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Chapter 6 Please

Please add a chapter six where Willow signs a FINO with Jack who takes her for a long weekend slavecation. There are all sorts of new and humiliating ways she can be humiliated. Maybe he loses her for four hours in a poker game and the gangbang is on where she truly has no control.

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