All Comments on 'Thunder And Lightning'

shouldn't this one have been in erotic couplings. It hasn't any of the cheating, extra marital that LW has.

I quit reading this "story" when the hubby got out of the tent naked in the early morning high in the mountains. What a stupid thing for the "writer" to insert when he didn't have to. No one ... absolutely NO ONE gets out of a warm sleeping bag high up and goes outside naked. It's too damn cold and anyone's privates would shrivel up in an instant. Based on the first paragraph of this "story," I didn't bother reading further. It would serve no purpose because the "writer" exposed his illogical bent of mind right up front. I just scrolled to the end of the story and voted zeros for this piece of nonsense.

Next time you go out in a thunderstorm live dangerously and erect something as well as a dick ,an umbrella metal of course.

It was erotic. It had an adventerous, loving couple. In my opinion, it was in the correct category.

Doesn't the header for loving wives section say something about adventerous wives? It doesn't mention cheating at all. I think cheating whore stories should be in fetish anyway. Or non-erotic. How anyone finds betrayal sexy is beyond me.

Anywho, thanks for a great story. Please keep up the good work.

The idiots who rated this story zero are just part of the trash that accumulates around good things in the absence of periodic cleaning. Don't worry about those losers and keep up the writing.

Well written and shows that even normal spouses can be erotic in some peoples words.<P>

Thanks for your talent and efforts.

With Regard

I could picture the place, and wish I could go camping there. I enjoyed your story and shared sensuality. You detailed a fantasy of mine, and did it nicely. Thank you