All Comments on 'Thunder and Lightning'

Thanks for a good read.....!

Good ending ... every choice leads to many paths ... all of which are unknown at the time.

A very enjoyable read.

David and Melanie are a very sexy loving couple. It is surprising how quickly and completely they reconnect. I like descriptions -- and I imagine David with a healthy splash of sexy hair across his muscular chest and abs. Give Melanie something to taste and caress! Please write more!

Great story. Brought back some memories of past relationship.

Amazingly enough... and I'm being dead serious here... as I reached page 2, the sky (which was very dark and ominous for the previous hour) opened up and I actually had real thunder as background noise while I read the story. Made me seriously wish I had a Melanie with me!