Thunder Rolls

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When everything is taken from you, what more can you give?
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Jay was a man, or what was left of one. He sadly waited in painful agony. Leaning against the door of a luxury sedan, watching its owner, and Jay's formerwife as they left the door of the office building and started to approach. They paused momentarily then came closer as he lifted his arms, showing his lack of weapons. He then balled his fists at his side.

Jay stood there, feeling like a shell of the man he once was. Her betrayal had diminished whatever character he had left. She had dumped him for her new boss. The new man was everything Jay was not. Rich. Confident. Powerful. Connected. A true Alpha male.

They had first clashed in middle school. The wealthy bully picking on the poor kid from the wrong side of the tracks. As they grew older, things escalated. It seems that whenever Jay accomplished anything of value, "J J" Jameson was there to tear it down. Maybe it was just a chemistry thing, but they were born to conflict, and everything he did seemed to antagonize his tormentor.

When Jay had tried to report the bigger student's actions, J. J.'s family stepped in, and everything was swept under the rug. The fact that Jay's single mother worked in the Jameson Family's Factory and depended on them for the food on their table only made things worse.

When J J left for College, Jay went to trade school on a delayed entry program for the army, believing he was finally free. There he met Joan, another poor kid from the wrong side. She became his everything, and they married two months before he left for boot camp. She got a job in a local business before Jay was sent overseas. Imagine his surprise, ten months later, when he learned that her company had been bought out by Jameson Holdings, LLC. Naturally she was now working directly for the man who had tormented him since childhood.

Just before his tour ended, he was served with her petition for divorce.

Jay was now just another crippled Army veteran with severe PTSD, a surgically repaired body, and scars over most of his body. Not that it mattered, as she had dumped him before the injury that ended his only combat tour. The divorce was all but finalized as he lay recovering from the IED blast that should have killed him.

It was only after he returned home to try to pick up the shattered pieces of his life that his destruction was completed. The explosion, on that dusty street in Afghanistan was just the beginning. By the time she and her lover were done with him, he was broken, financially ruined, under police investigations for drugs, child porn, and several lesser crimes. He knew he'd been set up, but he needed an answer.

Standing before his tormentors, Jay asked him.

"Why?".

"Because something about you has always pissed me off, and when I found out she was married to you, I realized that fate had set this up for me."

Joan's smug look only reinforced his words.

The trio made a fitting tableau as she clutched her prize, who stood, imperiously looking down at his broken opponent with the majesty of a Roman conqueror. Jameson Jennings, head of Jennings Holdings, LLC smiled down at his bent and broken victim, whose shaking fists hung uselessly at his sides.

"In what universe could you ever beat me, Jay?", the animus dripping with each syllable. "You were never a match for me. Do you think you could actually beat me in a fight? Your fists are shaking so bad I doubt that you can even throw a punch. Face it, we both know that you are no match for me."

Jay nodded his bowed head, sadly, as he spared a moment to scan the empty parking lot.

"That's true, you bastard. You've won. You have taken everything from me."

He finally raised his eyes to look at the pair of monsters that had totally destroyed his life.

"But my fists are not shaking from fear, or rage."

Locking eyes with his tormentor, he allowed himself a rueful hint of a smile.

"It just takes a lot of pressure for my thumbs to hold down the springs."

With a searingly bright light reflecting off the nearby buildings, the explosion caused a roll of thunder that broke windows more than a block away, leaving a dark depression in the parking lot, where once stood three people.

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fredbrownfredbrown7 days ago

Well! I guess that fixed that, but not my kind of plan. My theory is - always plan so that you walk away clean --- the explosives could just as well have been used to send that "luxury sedan" into orbit, with the loving couple in it .......

RimmerdalRimmerdalabout 1 month ago

"It just takes a lot of pressure for my thumbs to hold down the springs."

Does Not Mean grenades.

Roadside IED tore him up.

Car bomb took away all his pains.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Suicide no!

Taking them out ok But you be safe

You lose!!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

It’s been half century I’ve served.

I do not know how much explosive in a grenade.

The exterior is scored like shotgun pellets in all direction.

LOVE slap-hapy-papy #9. ( five+)

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Well done. The evil villain and the unfaithful wife get their just desserts and the MC gets to escape his misery. A little violence sometimes doesn't last very long!

Ed

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

LOVE IT.

Carnes8004Carnes80043 months ago

An example of things some returning military personnel have to face when coming home. When coming home from the sandbox, I was diagnosed a year later with PTSD (after my divorce). More needs to be done to help those who need help. In this story, the new husband pushed to far, and didn't take into account soldiers learn unknown skills. Skills that are not talked-about. Sad story,

chytownchytown3 months ago

* What a waste! Of one of the oldest storyline on this site!!!!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Damn.

qwertyuser9999qwertyuser99993 months ago

While violence may not be the best option, it should always be in your toolkit; even the nuclear version.

tangoperutangoperu3 months ago

@ReedRichards None, that's why he checked the parking lot before releasing the spring.

Escape_WithinEscape_Within3 months ago

When I read this story the first time it was posted in LW. I had to look here to find it and place a comment. Short and eloquent. The loving wife perhaps the last straw in the strife. Perhaps this might be taken as a fable regarding Hubris. Despite social status and economics there are ways in which we are all equal. Your MC leveled the playing field. Well done. I will look forward to similar tales of woe. Perhaps lengthy one as you develop a emotional tale of woe. Falling on a sword( a roman tradition) , seppuku (a japanese tradition), a bullet usually involves one. This involved more and the wife was collateral. Well done perhaps you can be the next Shogun.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

What the fuck? Weird fetish for a porn site. Nothing says eroticism like suicide bombers. 1 star.

sem999sem9993 months ago

When you push cat in the corner. Someone will get hurt.

5 stars.

Burner70Burner703 months ago

Lol great read .

mazk1098mazk10983 months ago

MC had nothing left, so he decided to go down with BIG BANG......pity that at least one of antagonistd didn't survive heavily disfigured and crippled. Such life would be much better punishment.

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