All Comments on 'Thylacine Alpha Ch. 06'

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tattooed_cowgirl15tattooed_cowgirl15over 4 years ago
I love your story however.

I really wish it was linger chapters! You build everything so nicely and smoothly that the reader can't help but get caught up in the words and lives of your characters only to have it all come smack, bang and crash at the end of the first page. Speaking for myself I don't like cliffhangers very much as I find it's a huge tease and not the good kind

GforGrahamGforGrahamover 4 years agoAuthor
thanks for comments tat,girl

Must thank all who have read and voted. Gives a boost to keep going. I didn't check the size of this chapter before loading it. Less than a page is lousy of me, I should have looked at this and kept writing. However I am trying to write just enough at a time to keep the story going forward, not too large to proof read, and mostly to help me keep momentum. The next chapter should be the final in this series, although originally it was just to be a short prelude to the real story. Guess it ran away with me hanging on.

Again thanks to all for persevering with my interupted story.

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I want to write more stories floating in my head, hoping they are shorter. Had 3+ years but cancer is back and treatment is starting. Hopefully this time can be rid of it. 11 Sep 20. Trying to get back to writing. It's slow going, as after 8 weeks of daily radiation treatment ...