All Comments on 'Ticket to Ride'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Bring Jared Back!!!

Jared was EVERYTHING for this story. Smooth talking conversationalist who was sensual and erotic. Would have been better without Shane's cheap bitch ass scene. Nothing but a lousy horn dog out for the benefits of getting laid. I hope Ryan decides to have some self worth and forget about the ticket he got at the end and look for making contact with JARED

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Jared

You had a great story going.... and then ruined it. The best part was Jared and the gentle lovemaking.

63lsmith63lsmithover 8 years ago
BAD ENDING

I enjoyed most of this story. but why would you ever replace Jared with an asshole like Shane??????

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Jared.

Make a part. Two with him in the skybox please

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great job

Nice twist with Shane, and both Shane and Jared were hot in their own ways. Story hung together nicely.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Sorry but this justs didn't work for me at all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Basketball

I love watching basketball ball and all those tall fine ass black bodies, and thinking about all those big dicks swinging between those legs; I would be a basketball whore because I would fucking take as many big black dicks as I could get.

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