by pleasteasme
as a bit of vanilla erotica its nicely done, i liked it.
I especially liked the sweet-hot ending with the promise of more to come. So many erotic stories end with a crashing climax and then leave the reader hanging. There is always more when the imagination has been fired by the body, isn't there?
...but I thoroughly enjoyed your journey. Keep writing.
Ooh, this sounds like it's going to be good... I can't wait for the next!
I really enjoyed this but was just getting warmed up when it ended.