All Comments on 'Tied'

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jackthegiantkillerjackthegiantkillerover 18 years ago
nicely done

as a bit of vanilla erotica its nicely done, i liked it.

midwestyankeemidwestyankeeover 18 years ago
Nicely done

I especially liked the sweet-hot ending with the promise of more to come. So many erotic stories end with a crashing climax and then leave the reader hanging. There is always more when the imagination has been fired by the body, isn't there?

LukkyKnightLukkyKnightabout 18 years ago
An incomplete story...

...but I thoroughly enjoyed your journey. Keep writing.

ithinkilikeyouithinkilikeyoualmost 13 years ago

Ooh, this sounds like it's going to be good... I can't wait for the next!

leibeleibeabout 9 years ago
Loved it but where's the ending

I really enjoyed this but was just getting warmed up when it ended.

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