All Comments on 'Tight Fittin' Jeans Ch. 07'

A very nice story.

thank you more

Thank you for this new chapter.

-g

This story should be made into a book and a movie. One of the best stories that I have ever rrad. You need to get a publisher. You are great.

It reads well and the characters seem real. My only criticism, and it's valid only if you are aspiring to the professional ranks, is it develops too slowly for the mass market. But maybe for woman's romance novels it's just right, I don't know. In any event, strong work. I'd say you ought to be talking to a pro writing consultant to fine tune your writing for eventual sale.