All Comments on 'Timber Pack Chronicles Ch. 02'

I have read everyone of ur stories many more than once and this is fast becoming one of my faves I can't wait for the next chapter...hopefully it wil be really soon :)

Love your stories! So glad to see a non human story from you also. I always get lost in any love story I read. Yours are no different. I feel a connection to your characters because the emotions are real. Love, loss, passion, friendship and betrayal are universal and you capture that with every story. Please keep writing!

(I am a 38 yr old woman who is married to wonderful man and we have two great kids.)

You are one of my all time favourite authors... I am thrilled with this new story too! The last one, the western, that was so much fun too! I like that you are broadening to other genres too. Your wolves are hot, but I like the mascot wolf the best. He is adorable. Looking forward for more!

Omg sexy hot jam!!! Plz update sooooooon!!!!!! Ur such a talented writer!! 5 stars for u!! :-)

love, Love, LOVE your story!!!! Please upload your stories faster! I love how Colton and Parker's relationship is coming along!!!

I love how you are developing this story, and stretching yourself as a writer by takng on different genres. I admit anything with werewolves has me interested, but combine this with your lovable characters and you have a winner!

I am loving this story,Colton is a hottie and so is Parker,Shell is a riot and I hope you write Jeds story too! Robcub32 you are fan freaking tastic!!

Expertly executed. All the excitement, anticipation, and finally the KISS. I love the way you mix smell & touch into your stories. Can't wait for the party and explosive present!

This is a brilliant story. Sexy and hot I wish I was Parker...

Wish I was Parker even though I'm a girl.

I love the build up...very cute and soooooooo romantic. I got all tingly reading it...soooo romantic! I agree, Shell's a riot and a really good friend, I think, everyone should have a Shell in their lives. The friendship rocks!

Oh, goody!! I hope you have something plan for Seth...dude needs a serious ass kicking, seriously. Hope Trey lays on him thick!! :)

Loved, loved, loved it! Great job, Rob! Cheers! (:

I devoured it! You're driving everyone nuts with this one. good job done. Kudos!

I LOVE IT! cant wait for the next chapter

Siiigghhh...robcub32...there must be a very pleasant place inside ur head...please always give us happy endings...

Can u plz give us an alien-human gay story next?...plz?pretty plz??

It's not even finished yet it is my favorite story. The only other story I seem to be drawn towards is Timmy and Hanks story and that's not even on Lit, lol.

How many chapters will this fascinating story be and will they come every few days?

Wish there were like 5 pages for each chapter, and can't wait for the next one.

Rob, you are amazing. I devoured all of your other stories on Lit, and I was depressed when I finished because I thought I wouldn't get anymore. Im so glad I was wrong! This story is awesome, I really can't wait for the next chapter!! We are all desperate and impatiently waiting for whatever you give us next!

I check every day for the next chapter and hope 3 isn't far behind. This story is so hot and can't wait to finish it. But then it will be over.

Read it and loved it, again! LOL. Seriously, this series may end up being my favorite out of all your stuff. And all your stuff is so good! Excellent job, Rob.

Love it so much.

Please give us more!

Winners were just announced for the 12th Annual Lit Awards and you won in your cat! Congrat's Rob!

loved it....more!more!

Draw us into your wonderful story and then leave us wanting more... NOW! Thanks for explaining why Colton is waiting, telling us he is alpha material, building the tension between Colton and Seth and Colton and Parker, and the hot kiss. Just what was he doing at the "wall outside the gym's side door"? Trying to control the wolf? I'm assuming it couldn't be relieving, uhmm, tension below the belt because you state later "He would save that for his mate." I'm glad you branched out into the supernatural. It's added a fun twist to you story

Also, congrats on your win in The 12th Annual Literotica Awards: Gay Male category for "The Jock and the Therapist."

CANN'T WAIT TILL NEW ONE COMES OUT

WE WANT MORE AND LONGEEEEEERRRRR. Love it already, another product of pure gold please post the next chapter soon and please make it longer....I am itching to read the next one ppppppllllleeease.

Really. This is all you give us? (so sad). The next chapter must be longer, please and thank you.

YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!! CONGRATULATIONS!!!!

Great job! :)

but next one, please just write about real, regular people, like you do so well. xoxoxoxo

I love your plots and story progression. Keep doing what you do!

I am loving this story and the characters, Parker and Colton are great and i cannot wait to read what happens next, your writing is so good and it just keeps getting better, don't stop!!!

Congrats and excellent job.

I love all your stories but honestly I think this is the best yet! I can't wait to read the next chapter! :-)

I love the 'Your mine.' It is so hot.

Thanks.

Hmmm, I'm surprised Parker didn't wonder or ask why he calls him 'pup'. I really like the story and was happy to see an update. I am wondering if Colton is older or if he is just 18? I really want to know what happened in the old pack that caused Colton and his dad move and what heppened to Colton's mom? I can't wait to see next chapter and when Colton claims him. Is the Alpha of this pack threatened by Colton's obviously alpha material wolf?

Keep writing!

good second chapter but I kind of expected more

I loved it. I can't wait for the third chapter...this story is getting so good. I'm a sucker for wolf stories.

This was a lovely chapter cant wait for more.

I know many of you would prefer longer chapters for this story but please understand that two pages on Literotica is about 9-13 pages in Word. That's a lot of story and a lot of writing for the author. This is also a multi-chapter story so Rob will post as soon as possible but needs to pace them out. Your support and enthusiasm is always appreciated from all of the authors on Literotica. I just felt that needed to be said and I also look forward to additional chapters.

Also, congrats boo boo on your win for the "Jock and the Therapist". So freaking proud of Rob and thank you to everyone for supporting Rob and other wonderful authors on Literotica who bring us incredible stories for FREEEEEEEE.

I didn't know the pages here took so many in Word. I'll keep that in mind when I, too, am frustrated because I want longer chapters. Can't wait for the birthday party, Rob! Good stuff!

Nah, I think you just spoiled us with all your super long chapters on previous stories. :P I write mm on another site and trying to keep up with weekly updates with life going on can be hard. Doesn't mean I don't get as whiny as the next reader when my fav authors have a story in progress.

I can't say enough how much I appreciate your writing. I was wondering how Colton could be a newcomer to the area and an alpha of his group of wolf friends. I'm glad you answered it with this chapter. The twist that Sean is also a wolf was great! I was wondering why he only had a fat lip when Trey hit him when the other kid's arm busted when Colton hit him and there was the answer.

I'm sure he'll get into more trouble harassing Parker though, he seems the too stupid to know better type. Thanks for the great update!

love this story... its my fav of all your stories... so far...and thats saying a lot because "big ben" made me cry.... cant wait for more... thanks for sharing! :) xx

MORE MORE MORE!

Oh my Jesus u are such a tease you are playing with my emotions Rob....lol but i can't wait for more

PLEASE make the next one like 5 times longer! I cnt get enough!

on your win for the 12th annual literotica awards....love your stories

Wow! This is better than most of the books i've read! Your style of writign really lets me realte to the characters and the story (were wolfness aside)! Keep it up and I can't wait for the next chapter :O

Oh my God Rob, this is so good. I almost peed my pants when Shell called Parker 'hooker'. Me and my brothers are always calling each other that...strictly joking of course. Thanks so much for sharing your writing.

So far this is beyond great. I can not get enough of it and I can not wait for the rest of it to come out. I almost died laughing at the hooker part because of how humerous it was and for the fact it reminded me of layfette out of true blood. Keep up the great work.

I am one of your biggest fans. I am sure you arevon your way to getting another award. I can not wait for the rest of the series. I check your blog everyday!!!!!!

Now how long do we wait for the next chapter? Please don't make us resort to the sad puppy eyes, mine suck.

As a huge fan of Teen Wolf (MTV), I am so happy I found this story. I know they're not related, but the similarities titillate me nonetheless. looking forward to more!

I'm a huge fan of werewolf stories so I was drawn to this one instantly. You're an excellent writer. The character interactions feel very real and I can't wait to see what happens next.

First of all you are my favorite author from this site. I couldn't believe my luck when I found your stories because I love stories where smaller man likes bigger men (with or without dom/sub) and they have to be romance stories. And I also love non human stories especially werewolfs. It's like you are reading my mind when you are writing this story or the other ones. Bubby and the cop was my favorite before but I have to say I love this one too... Hopefully we will get the 3rd chapter soon :)

Ladite

more please. now.

OMG, more as soon as possible. I LOVE IT!!!!

I read this story because I enjoyed your others but am I missing something or did the story end very abruptly? When I started reading it and thought omg not another werewolf story. What next a story about the jersey shore troll nooki oops I mean snooki. Nothing ever happened with Colton & Parker. Let Parker become mutant that will turn into a normal human being if he can such the life out of a werewolf and make him human. Then Colton and Parker can live happily ever after and have a house full of wolf puppies.

I love this story. Please don't keep us waiting too long

SO GOOD.

I read ALL your stories. UGHHH i don't know if i can wait much longer!!!!!!!!!!!

I doubt seriously if anyone else is interested in your comments, which were barely understandable & (if you're a fan of that show) of no significance.

Yes, this is a complete waste of my time but it riles me up to see comments from "anonymous." Why bother to comment if you can't exchange ideas in a dialogue w/the author or other Lit members?

You're taking up valuable space that could be used by a Lit member who was intelligent enough to open a free lit membership under a false name and a throw away, free email account, also under a false name.

The above allows for true anonymity & (on behalf of authors) for appropriate discussion, dialogue & participation here w/members and authors.

Ciao!

Oh no. Please don't go all Twilight on us Rob. I really enjoy your stories but I'm allergic to the sci-fi stuff. The story is great, and I like the figurative shift, but too much brain power spent on decoding what is supposed to be a pure, sensual, "sappy" love story.

I love your writing, and this story is no different. I can always imagine your characters as if in real life, and enjoy how their relationships grow and evolve. I guess for that reason having the sci-fi aspect gives the story a whole different feel to me, because I can't imagine them as a real couple any more, but I still enjoy the story, and much thanks for sharing your craft with us!

You have the knack of drawing in the details of a story without belaboring it. It's a great read even on the 3rd time.

Getting better sweetie :D

This is my second time reading this story. I love that for a change the communication as wolves is done with their body language, it is wonderful and fasinating because most other were stories they suddenly communicate telepathically. This story is awesome. Thank you for sharing it with us.

(where Colton's blue flannel shirt hung. He had slept with it under his pillow last night, holding it so that he could smell it.)

---that's sweet- but i think it would have worked better if Parker had worn the shirt to bed- like a sleep shirt- and he could have felt wrapped up in Colton's strong arms and scent while he slept- and woke up to the same safe, content feeling.

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("Remind me again why I like you?")

--i think this would work better if he said: 'remind me again why we're friends?' if Colton hears Parker say 'i like you' to a girl, it could cause misunderstanding

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(Jed naturally fell in line as his enforcer.)

--yet it's only been Trey and Colton to protect Parker so far...and i was wondering why Colton didn't hurt Seth more for trying to beat/rape his boy_he broke the other kid's wrist but Seth only left with a fat lip- is it cause Seth is a wolf too? and if Seth is a wolf, shouldn't he be beyond bullying weak humans- absolutely no challenge and no honor-maybe we find out more about this later?

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He kept his eyes on Seth, not blinking even once. After a few long, intense moments, Seth finally backed down and looked away.

Like always.

Pussy.

---it was surprising to find out Seth was a wolf. and Parker jacked him off- i wonder if Seth is secretly attracted to Parker and trying to fight it? Look forward to reaing moore.

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----great story telling so far- thanks for sharing it with us- i look forward to read on

ive read this three times still loving it

el beso mas sexy del mundo ^^ me babeo

I have read this story atleast five times and it just gets better each time i read it, i just love your stories and i can't wait to read more, in the mean time i will just continue to devour what you have on here!!!!!

robcub32..i bend over and lick your balls.? you hot stud writer you are.? xxxx

i agree with dinkyboots.?

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took me a moment to realise I was reading half of twilight

This so does not remind me of that lame little movie. These story I love where as twilight just made me hit the off button.

and still fucking awesome. you are a god sir.

jonathanlovescock, not only do you agree with Dinkyboots, you ARE Dinkyboots. Nobody is fooled.

5 woofs :-)

One of the best.

back to read it again

I swear I got goose bumps, damn you can spin a story! love it, you are awesome, moving on to the next chap now cant wait, who needs sleep lol

Ohh my GOD!! That one was so exiting....!!!

Teen wolf lol

the story is getting better ,the more i read i love it.

Love the dynamic of a wolf pack

Your characters are everything

Maybe I didn't grasp properly grasp Colton's alter ego in the first chapter, even though now it seems pretty obvious where that was going. During this chapter I kept thinking " 'werewolf!' Is that where the story is heading?"

Obviously Colton and Parker have a very magnetic effect on each other. It seems as though that is heading towards a definite physical conclusion.

Seth and his cronies are something else - just another group of bullies.

The story line is very captivating and keeps one enthralled. Your imagination is amazing, Rob.

Love and Best Wishes from Spadger2

I don't care who you are. If you're this possessive, fuck off. Keeping him from friends, twice, that's a red flag and deserves an immediate ditch. I can't get over that!

The rest of your stuff is awesome, so I'm sticking with that ^_^

Try to remember two things...

He’s a werewolf.

This is fiction.

Second time reading this, still great : )