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Jay_B1969Jay_B1969almost 12 years ago

Look at that; now you have over 200 comments. Great story I loved it. I can't wait to read book two.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
MORE!!

My favorite story on this whole sight!! I NEED book 2! Also you are a great writer love all you stories don't stop writing! :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Please Hurry with Part 2

This story is nice. I keep reading it over and over. Please hurry with Part 2.

Marked1997Marked1997almost 12 years ago

I was wondering are you planning to write a part 2 (or book 2) to this series? I've read it twice love it! BIG FAN!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

I'm with the everyone else. GET YOUR ASS IN GEAR and write the second book before I HUNT YOU DOWN AND KICK YOUR ASS!!!!! Lol

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Good book. When are u gonna write the 2 book

gambler74gambler74almost 12 years ago
great story

well i have read all your series and i must say your one heck of a writer :

natiwoodnatiwoodalmost 12 years ago
Wow...

I cannot convey how amazing this story is in words. I am flabbergasted! You have a gift with words, and I am hoping that there's going to be a book two. If not, it was still an astounding story to read.

ThornQueenThornQueenover 11 years ago
Waiting Waiting .....

So how's Book II coming along? :D

playswdaddyplayswdaddyover 11 years ago
Amazing

This ENTIRE series was just awesome. Beautiful and HAWT as hell! I can't wait for BOOK II !!

Gayobsessedgirl_1Gayobsessedgirl_1over 11 years ago
Oooooo

It was awesome! But when is book two coming out!? I want to read about Jed! He has to find love. Trey too of course!

a_temptedsoula_temptedsoulover 11 years ago
Wanting more

Your writing is brillant!! I hope that you continue this series!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
woww

Wow I loved it I wish I could find my colton someday me nd Parker like it exactly the same keep up the fabulous work can't wait for the next oneā™„

ingaalleningaallenover 11 years ago

Great series. Your best main characters too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
if you were a girl i would tottaly kiss you ;)

this was the best story i've ever read!! I totally declare myself as your fan XD

PLEASE WHERE IS BOOK 2?!!

This is too amazing to stop here!!!!

Dont be crule, you cant stop here :'(

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
More !!

Please !! Where is book 2 ?! You have to write more !

Aurelian69Aurelian69over 11 years ago
Book 2 ?!?!

When is the next book coming out ?? This story was amazing !! I just finished it and I'm already reading it again. Please don't leave us in suspense any longer !!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Another pleas!!!!

Please write another!!!!

These are amazing stories!!!!!!

Keep writing dude :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Please write something about the start of Buck and Stan!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
JED

You ,sir, NEED to make a sequel for jed. He cant be lonely his whole life. Please and thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Okay I just have to...

...beg you for a sequel, honestly I enjoyed reading this just way too much, it's just so amazing and I couldn't love more the characters and the dinamics you provide, you mention something about book I, well, I just need book II, NEED!, please keep writing, the story's just so hot and so funny and so emotional, I just need more of Colton and Parker, Shell, Shep and Billy, I just need more of the amazing characters you created, please keep writing!, I'm honestly begging here...

pervyfoxypervyfoxyover 11 years ago
Please...

make more, this is a very beautiful story, we need a sequel for Jed, he needs someone

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

are you gonna write book to

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Write book 2!!! This love story is amazingggg

Seriously

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
"Show me your belly, Pup!"

Best, sexiest line! EVER!

tuckerpusstuckerpussover 11 years ago

Oh God that was good - I could read it every day!!!!!

kerbearkerbearover 11 years ago
More Please!!!

I know I shouldve written between chapters but I just kept on reading to find out what would happen.This is a great story and I really hope you write more about all the members of the Timber pack.You write really well and I look forward to more.

(hopfully)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
awesome

totally love the story line. But when are you going to tell what happens next. I mean with Jed and Trey and their mates. Plus you have Curtis and Shell with a baby along the way. Don't leave me hanging.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
more please!!

I am amazed at every story that you have written.

My WORD!! I cannot wait for book 2. Can you give an estimation pleaseeee.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
If you aren't too busy...

We're all waiting in suspense for book 2....please write more amazingness! Can't wait to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
in love

I'm so in love with this book can't wait for part2 I read it for 3 days over and over

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Please write another

I love all your stories but Timber Pack is definitely my favourite. I have read it several times and still enjoy it each time. Please write more of this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

I really liked the characters and the plot was well thought through. I especially liked the spin with the old alpha's son. But, believe it or not, i actually thought there was too much sex. After a while it felt like I was just reading the same thing over and over. It happened so much, it was just a given and kinda lost its power. Try having more scenes that are emotionally intense without sex, more playfulness and emotional intimacy.

MistressKinksMistressKinksover 11 years ago
Will there really be a book two?

Huge fan of all your stories, will there really be a book two?

I really hope so. I love this series, and want to hear more- especially if Parker and Colton will have kids. Plus I'm dying to know what Shells wolf looks like as well as if she has a boy or girl.

Love it keep writing.

Jess

nuckin1futsnixnuckin1futsnixover 11 years ago
hopeful

here's to me hoping for a book two maybe jed's story or trey's it was fantastic i'm so glad i finally read it love and best wishes for the future nix

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
this series was awesome!!!!!!!!!

I hope u will keep writing this was fantastic and u have a real talent! I hope u write another book because i am dying to know what Shell's kid is like and if Colton and Parker ever do have pups:) keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
BOOK TWO PLZ!!!!!!!

I know this may be asking a lot of you but I can't help myself, you just have to do a book two of this serise, It would be a major injustice if you didn't. This serise was so good and so awesome from great beggining to fantastic end. I really want to read more and with so many characters who have so much more that could be told bout their lives, like will Jed or Trey ever find their mate; what will Shell baby look like and what will happen when she finally shifts for the first time. And also what will happen to the rivalry between the Timber Pack and the FVP. Their is still so much to write about and I hope you really consider writing more of this story. You've really done a great job!!! :)

88nicegirl88nicegirlover 11 years ago
Write about Jed!!!

I know he said he didn't want a mate but he needs one!!! Trey does too!!! Please?!!!! Pretty please?!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Please Please Please

Write a story about Jed! I just absolutely loved him. I'd live to see who Trey ends up with but I don't want you to make him gay.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Next

Please write about Colton and Parker using a surrogate to have pups. Maybe their one surrogate could have fraternal twins with one from each father or have twin surrogates give birth around the same time with a pup from each father.

Plus, add more members to the pack and deal with the council and whoever is messing with Parker's dad. Also, I agree with keeping Trey straight. A little variety adds dimension to the story and shouldn't be an issue.

Just a few ideas.

lonleylucaslonleylucasover 11 years ago
YES

PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER BOOK IN TIMBER PACK CHRONICLES WITH PARKER AND COLTON WITH A LITTLE PUP!!!!!

ingilizingilizover 11 years ago
compulsory

A book 2 is compulsory. At the moment I feel as if I have been left hanging.

The pack has got to grow, so the other boys must find mates, and they must all have kids or adopt them.

Lesbian_lovelyLesbian_lovelyover 11 years ago
JED

The second book should be about jed finding his mate. That would be perfect.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

OMG!!! I NEED MORE OF THIS STORY!!!!!

Bundy5Bundy5over 11 years ago

Read and 5'd it all.

Hope Jed finds a mate in the next book. I think I fell in love with his character when he declared it was time to fuck up some tacos.

ChmanzonChmanzonabout 11 years ago
another story?

There are so many loose ends...is there ever gonna be another Timber Pack story?

delightdawndelightdawnabout 11 years ago
loved it

Just finished it. Sure hope there is more somewhere. Can't wait to go onto some more of yours. Been following your blog too. Good luck.

TerrapedesTerrapedesabout 11 years ago
Fantastic

Much love to Rob, can't wait to find out what happens next! Keep writing.

cherrynyxcherrynyxabout 11 years ago
I'm going to fuck up some tacos!

Agreed, Jed is fucking awesome. I loved this story, it wasn't the most original plot, but I felt like the dynamic between the characters was amazing. How could you not sign up to be a part of the Timber Wolf Pack? I hope this story continues and I would honestly love to read offshoots for every character. Especially Jed, and Stan and Buck. Those two were just the cutest.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Colton is AWESOME!!

I just love Colton! Can hardly wait for book two.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Fell in love with these guys.................

I loved this story and I'll admit I'm anxiously awaiting more just like everyone else. Please?????????????????????

GabrielClarkGabrielClarkabout 11 years ago

what a great story. loved it until the end. the sex scenes aren't losing their fire throughout the chapters. and the plot is really well written. excellent work :)

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66about 11 years ago
I like how you say end of Book 1 sooo......

hurry up with book 2 I love these guys and I want to read more please!!!!!

Bellad19Bellad19about 11 years ago
Loved it,,

I so love your story. I'm about to settle in and read your other submissions. Well told I like how your characters can stand on their own not defined by the other characters or the story to tell us who they are.. left me wanting more and like all I can't wait for book 2 3 4.......

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
wonderful!

i love your writting!this story is funny and serious and sexy and romantic and sad and happy all at once! i love the characters and the plots, there is never a dull moment and i cant wait to read more of your stories!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
OMG

I am totally hoping for another book. I come on here to read every once and a while scanning the site for something "interesting" to read and I stumbled upon this story, I spent four hours last night reading it and three hours today. I dont comment on anyones work but this deserved a comment from me. please make another book I would be really depressed if you didnt

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Couldn't stop reading it!!

I've read all of your stories, and this is by far my favorite! I loved all the characters and there different personalities. Can't wait for book 2! (In the next book, hopefully Jed gets a mate!)

kattoy120vkattoy120vabout 11 years ago
Excellent Read!!

You are an excellent Bard...

Weaving sufficient and imaginative detail into every turn without battering this reader with a multitude of trivia.

Your talent has invoked both my empathy as well as the necessary suspension of disbelief that allowed me to not only enjoy your story, but to resurrect a sense of essential goodness and hope that may persist beyond this minute.

Thank You!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
FANTASTIC STORY!!!!

i loved the whole thing, this is my 3rd time reading it, are you thinking of continuing the story along at all, cus if you are that would be fantastic

kerbearkerbearabout 11 years ago
More Please!!!!

This is a great story. Nine chapters just isnt enough.Though you have not updated since 2011,I hope you and yours are doing ok and the year (2013)is going great for you.I also hope the creative juices are still flowing and that we readers get to see more of the Timber Pack and all its members.Nice job. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
More!!!

Great Story, cant wait for the next Book.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Fantastic story. Definitely needs a second series: who was Parker's dad talking to on the phone? The Sheriff is up to something - I'd guess he's feeling threatened by how powerful Colton might become as he gets older, and is planning something to derail the new pack. Please, pretty please, can we have a second series on these guys?

(Don't like Shell, and not crazy about Curtis, I have to say. They could move away, as far as I'm concerned, but there's lots of potential for new characters in having new drifters join the pack, new wolves joining from the main pack, etc.)

And - hygiene! - need to watch this. You have Colton's fingers heading for Parker's hole while food is being served and they're about to eat!

All in all, though - definitely one of the best stories here - Thanks!

Lily_of_the_ValleyLily_of_the_Valleyabout 11 years ago

You have 263 comments on this, Rob, and most of them are begging for more . . .

Here's no 264: "Please, sir, may we have some more?"

nybor01nybor01about 11 years ago
please!!

god, i love this story. and I just wanna be one of those who ask for more. pls pls pls.! this was the best story I read here at Literotica..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
awesome

loved it would have liked it more if shell had, had her baby but it was good

lonleylucaslonleylucasabout 11 years ago
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LONG LIVE TIMBER PACK. CAN'T WAIT TILL BOOK 2

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

I really want Stan and Buck's story! Also more Timber Pack. A sequel maybe? I loved it, it was amazing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Best story i have read on Literotica. Cant wait to read Book 2!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

you are amazing, I have read almost all of your stories on here and I loved every single one :) keep up the great work!

Miss_SeraphinaMiss_Seraphinaalmost 11 years ago
Amazing story!

I have no idea how I could have missed this story until now, I'm so happy I found it. It is so well written and the storyline is just perfect and kept me hooked all the way through.

I hope to read more about the Timber Pack (I would love to see a happy ending for Jed, he seemed sad at the end).

Thank you for sharing this wondefull story :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Book 2?

I need book two in my life now please. Don't rush, make it good. Thanks for the great read.

luv4rainluv4rainalmost 11 years ago
love

Second time reading this story... and I know shame on me for getting this far and not commenting. I love your writing! I hope you do write a sequel someday this story is one of my favorites.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
NEED

INEED BOOK TWO PLEASES. Im dying to see shelley and curtis and how the pup affects the pack!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
AMAZING!!!

This was a great story, keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Loved it***************

My favorite character was all of them. You did and amazing job with them. Shell was hilarious. Can't wait for book 2. Thank you for writing and sharing.

K.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Wow!!

what a great story! you've had me eager to come back read more over the past few days. i'm waiting impatiently for book 2 now! you're great at writing and making the characters feel real. thanks so much for sharing!!

tac_naynwafflestac_naynwafflesalmost 11 years ago
HOLY STRAWBERRY CAKE

Book 2! Book 2! *fangirl scream* I want it! I already know it'll be as good as this,if not better.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Next!

That was good, now you need put out book 2 :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
More please

In my opinion best series on your profile. I can't wait till chapter 2. I don't usually read gay stories, because I don't find them as arousing, but I'm really glad I read this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
wow!

that was freaking amazing

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66almost 11 years ago
It doesn't matter how many times I read it

I love it each time. You know at the bottom when you say end of Book 1... well can we have a guesstimate of when there will be a Book 2!!! Please :):)

Would love to see the progression of this pack.

LustyDragonLustyDragonalmost 11 years ago
O.K. Its Book 2 Time

When will It be here?

Soon I hope!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Loved your book

Ever since i found out about The Ranch Foreman i have bee waiting patiently. Well sweet heart i am agoraphobic, i live in London UK. i love to read and you are my fav author on lit.I don't do twitter or face book, this was the only way i could tell you how much i loved The Ranch Foreman. I brought it on the 14th and read it twice, and everyday since.You always impress, i look forward to your books in the future. congratulations on having it published, it's about fucking time.

Thanks for cheering up this old gal (i'm was 44 last month, but i feel 80)

MythladyMythladyalmost 11 years ago
As always

As always, every time I read this book over, I love it. This is something like my sixth time. You are on the best selling and best romance list on all romance books for the ranch foreman and the degan incident. Those books were also great reads. I bought the ranch foreman and I read it straight through the same day. Loved, loved, loved it. Am going to read it again. Your books are all just so good that I have to read them over and over. Hope to get a book 2 of timberwolves soon. You absolutely, positively rock and I will always read all your old and new books.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
amazing read

I've read hundreds of stories on this site and this is one I've had to go back and read over and over again. please complete and post book II. this world you've created and the characters in it are so wonderful. we need to see who is the person responsible for the spy orders, what sex the baby is, new members, mates for jed and trey etc. please complete it soon. thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Loved your stories

This is the second time, I've read this story, but only because I've been reading your other stories multiple times, I can say I've read big ben more that 20 times, it's my favorite as well as the series that follow it! So today I read your story again, and I was all giggly again, I hope you write and post Book II of this story, it was fantastic, and hopefully you have someone for Jed, I can't stand to see him lonely, maybe he'll find his mate soon enough. Well hope to hear from you soon, cause right now I desperately want to read The Ranch Foreman, but I don't own a credit card, so I'll have to wait, but I can't wait to read it soon, your my favorite author! ~ D.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I wish you'd publish this on Amazon...

I would totally buy it! It's such a good story and I'd love to be able to read it on my Kindle... Thanks for writing it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
*thumbs up*

This is fantastic! I am a total werewolf-loving fan and this was amazing. It had love, smexy hott man-lovin, and a PLOT! Plot is very important. If this were a book, I would totally buy it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Awesome!

We need this to become a series! I'd SO buy it! Thanks, mate!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
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I hope that when you post the TPC 2 that it won't be on Gay Authors cause I'm not paying for it. Wanted to read your new story but couldn't. I love your stories but not enough to pay for it.

Jimmy410Jimmy410over 10 years ago
Amazing

This is simply amazing! I LOVED IT! I have read it three times, and each time i fet exited!. I do look forward to more from this! Please keep up the fantastic work.

dairetodairetoover 10 years ago
awesome story

Would love to read more about The Timber Pack.

it was just fantastic. Great characters and such room for development

PaleAngel_90PaleAngel_90over 10 years ago
Lovely Story

I loved this story,i canĀ“t wait to read more of your wonderful writing :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

I thought this story was amazing you can just feel the love when you read it I would buy this book. I hope there's gonna be another want to know about the baby

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
End of book 1?

Where's book 2? I was really hoping for a part two to take place 4 years in the future once Trey finishes college and comes back home to TImber Pack. And maybe to the realization that he is gay or bi but most importantly that he is in love with Jed. I think these two dominant males have the capacity to start a love story that would rival

Parker and Coltons. Hope you follow up on this suggestion.

Mistress_CanadaMistress_Canadaover 10 years ago
Book 2

On Rob's blog, he posted a Halloween treat with an excerpt from a story he's writing on called "Enforcer." It looks like Jed might fall for an unhappy beta from Tahoe pack.

The excerpt didn't actually contain Jed, but it's named Enforcer, so that's my guess.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

"Who were you talking to?" Colton demanded, using his deep alpha voice.

Barney's eyes widened at the sound of Colton's voice. His body trembled in fear. Parker tightened his grip and Barney sang like a canary. "I-I-I don't know! I have access to Forrest's financials; they asked me to watch the accounts. I found out by accident what Forrest was. Then they asked me to watch Colton. They said he was dangerous. They wanted me to keep you away from Colton, but it was too late."

Robcub - we really, really NEED a sequel - we need to know what this is about!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
anything else?!?!?!?!?

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuummm... END OF BOOK I??? WTF? You're makin' a sequel?! please do! this story is fucking awesome

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Thank you!

I just spent hours reading this thing, no Masterpiece, and Worth Every bit of sleep deprivation. It has everything, just everything. Keep up the amazing job your doing, please!

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