All Comments on 'Time After Time'

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LoneStarRiderLoneStarRiderabout 13 years ago
Okaaaaay.......

Well written, but even for sci-fi, this story is just plain weird.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

One of the most original stories I've read. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Would have like it better

If she stopped it and killed her future self. One there's a story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
STARTED OUT BAD WITH USING A AWARD WINNING SONG TITLE AS YOUR STORY TITLE!

YOUR STORIES FIRST AND MOST IMPORTANT MISTAKE AND THE SINGLE FATAL MISTAKE BOILS DOWN TO THE FACT THAT A SINGLE BODY CAN NOT EXIST TWICE IN A SINGLE PLANE OF EXISTENCE, THE MOMENT SHE TOUCHED HER PAST SELF BOTH WOULD MADE BOTH DISSAPEAR FROM EXISTENCE! SECOND MISTAKE IS IF IT HAD WORKED THE FIRST TIME THE ORIGINAL SELF WOULD OF ALSO TRAVELED BACK TO AT LEAST WATCH! OR AT LEAST HAVE GIVEN HER A VIDEO CAMERA TO RECORD IT!

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