All Comments on 'Time for School Ch. 18'

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pariah001pariah001over 9 years ago

Awesome chapter with the confrontation with the Time Gods! I really hope this series keeps on going now that he has more powers and knows how to use his gift! Thanks for the chapter Anthony 5 stars as usual!

connoisseur29connoisseur29over 9 years ago
****

If that's the end, it went pretty well. Took a couple of days to go through the entire story. One wonders which of his conquests will be his true love. So much for science fiction. It is never ending. A scattered few typos hither thither and yon, but not enough to get excited about. Ciao!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More with Jordan

I really want to see him realize that his deep friendship with Jordan is love and have one more story with her. He doesn't have to stop time or anything, but they should have sex.

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