All Comments on 'Time Isn't Real Pt. 02'

Can't believe it's over! Tell me there's another chapter. One thing - during the Bryson scene I thought Brooke said she was 23. But with Lorna she describes herself as 20. Regardless, five stars!

I stumbled across this story, and now that I have read both chapters. I am pleased to say that you have wowed me, I do not give 5 stars often.

Infact it's very rare, but you deserve every star..

You have made the Time Travel troupe an enjoyable read. I enjoyed it alot.

@Anon

This is the last chapter I'm afraid! But I have more good things on the way ;)

And good catch! That's just a mistake hahaha

First I thought you'd somehow read my mind because I started a story very similar to this concept a year or so back. I left it a few paragraphs in as life interfered and never got back to it. Regardless of my barely-scribbled idea - you took this to an amazing level. Extremely well done. Sensual and titilating, yet touching and very identifiable. I take my hat off to you!

Such a good story. You're a very gifted writer.

I loved this series. It's the best time stop series I have read. Saying that, it did feel a bit rushed at the end. I would have enjoyed seeing whether her mom worked with Hugo or was played by him. Alternatively, I could have gone with a more extended series where her old neighbor was explored more and the whole house and Penny become a polyamorous time stopped harem for Brooke...

Great job!

By far the best time stop story I've read. Can't wait to see where this is going!

Really, really a great story. So moving (see what I've done there ? :) ) and well thought story, lovable character despite being all so human.

Wonderful !!

Really good story, but one question: what happened to the notebook? Does Brooke have it? Was it left with the body?

Perfection.

Good closure (at least to my liking).

I agree with other comments about this being the best time stop series.

I have never left comments on stories, but for this I just had to.

I'd give more stars if I could.

I can now die peacefully :P ... eventually.... or by cancer (somehow ;P ).

Wonderful.

Well done

This is a great story

A sequel could be nice though. Not a “chapter 3”, but a sequel. Will Hugo try to find her? What will happen?

Fuck.

Fantastic.

Great story, I really enjoyed it. Well written with a good ending too.

That was an excellent story. Well some.

Well done I meant.