All Comments on 'Time Smut Ch. 05'

the tacos at the taco house were mediocre, but the burritos were to die for?

Character personality continuity is a critical aspect of character development & authenticity. Consistency in their personality allows the reader to more readily believe the character when you have them say, or do, something ridiculous; something actually possible in their world.

Good little tale, wondering how it may end up. Thanks

GeoD