All Comments on 'Time to Grow Up'

by Lilytoy

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daddy1950daddy1950almost 9 years ago
Loved it, Lily

Maybe the basis for a new screenplay for another sequel after 'ted2.' Love your dirty mind. A well deserved 5 stars.

LilytoyLilytoyalmost 9 years agoAuthor
Thanks Daddy 1950!

Thank you for the good comments and I will be crying my eyes out about the very well-written and constructive critique from...who was it?...oh that's right they didn't leave their name...haters will be haters...;-P

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Cute

But daddy missed his chance at eating some sweet teenage pussy, so I guess you will have to do a part two.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Fantastic

wow I hope you do a Part two it is well written and you leave it open for so much more :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Loved it

Very cute and hot. More more more. I wanna know just what barbie and Ken did :)

hugo_runehugo_runealmost 9 years ago

Loved it and want a part 2. I love her dirty little mouth

LilytoyLilytoyalmost 9 years agoAuthor
Really?

Definitely not a paedophile (lets get the spelling right!). Maybe you should have read the header of the story. Consenting age means what it says. I do not condone underage sex in any way, shape or form.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
😀

Can we get a part 2

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Please please please make a part 2

SoftKtty24SoftKtty24over 2 years ago

Mmmmmmm...I see this as a prequel to the other Lily & Daddy stories. Gives us background as to how their sex tales started. Definitely would love for you to explore this story for another chapter about when Daddy first took Lilly and turned her into his little sex toy. Would love to know whether the wife/mother was either not meeting his sexual demands or that he was tired of her and seeking younger flesh. Great writing, as one reviewer stated, women do know how to spin a good tale of sexual pleasure based on our own sexual desires. Keep writing the Lily & Daddy tales

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