All Comments on 'Time with a Mature Stripper'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Too short and too fast paced. Slow it down, make it real. This story was anything but done. You need to do a second part.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great start, but we need more! Chapter 2 better be coming soon!!!

BruneauBruneaualmost 3 years ago

Good story. Very sexy. I would like to read more. I hope you keep this going.

woodhard65woodhard65almost 3 years ago

Hope this store continues.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Excellent start.

Give a little more, both of these characters have more in them to give, I am sure of it.

chytownchytownalmost 3 years ago

Hot and sexy read. Love hairy bushes and big azzes. Good read. Thanks for sharing

hobie1010hobie1010almost 3 years ago
Loved it

I want more, do you plan on continuing or wrapping your "Older Neighbor Next Door" series. I really was enjoying it

Stutheblue55Stutheblue55almost 3 years ago

Right up my street, loved it

More More More

Crusader235Crusader235almost 3 years ago
Love it

Almost a mature damsel in distress, loved it. Hope you write some more of their story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Read a lot of terrible stories and it's refreshing to find a nice one like this keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

i loved it. wish i could be so lucky

Sausage17Sausage17over 2 years ago

You’ve got me hook, line and sinker! This was very sweet, definitely looking forward to reading more!

spr1987spr1987over 2 years ago

Great story. I liked the tone and pace.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A very hot story. I love large women , this was a huge turn on.

Rob_RoyaleRob_Royale10 months ago

Well done. This stirred up an old fantasy. I'll be reading some more.

SlomoverSlomover10 months ago

Greg story. Looking forward to reading more.

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