All Comments on 'Timegasms 6 - Coach'

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jenorma2012jenorma2012over 6 years ago
not bad

I think this is the first time I read this story, I will have to go back and read parts 1-5

LitEroCatLitEroCatover 6 years agoAuthor
It was revised due to Lit objections

It was submitted in a short form on 10/28/17 as a non erotic story. The revision added an extra trip that sets up the trip back to 1962. Here are my input comments showing the painful trail to publishing. I sent this in before ch 5 for several reasons. It was first rejected because ch 5 wasn't in.

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It took 10 days to figure this out from 10/28 to 11/6? Chapter 5 and 6 are independent. ...........................

[It was rejected again for spelling - MATER and KNOW were correct but not in context. Fixed and resubmitted.]

[- It was rejected for an age violation: My traveler visited her 10 yr old self naked. No sex, no talk of sex, totally non erotic.]

Please publish this ASAP as I have other stories depending on it.

.........Now 11/10 - There are no minors in any sexual situations in this story. Children exist- mentioning them is not sexual. My traveler visited herself when she was 10 and they watched her dad die. How is that sexual? I read this story to a mixed age group and got only + comments. ------- Note it is NON EROTIC cat.-----------

------------- 11/13 Aged the child to 18 just for your hyper sensitive censors. There still is no sex in this.......... Did I upload the wrong file? I aged her to 18 JUST FOR YOU!

11/20 Now you're just screwing with me! I aged the girl to 18 just for you and yet you still reject it twice for AGE? Your misinterpretation of your own rules is bordering on harassment. Whoever is doing this - explain HOW this violates your age rule. I read it to my writer group as a non-erotic story and had no complaints. Is your bot screwed up or is this personal???

[I sent 2 PMs to a mod and never heard back.]

I've never received an answer from these 'contact us' forms, but I'll try again as well as a PM. ... submitting Timegasms 6 - Coach for the FIFTH time. The last three rejections were for violating your age rule, yet I aged the girl to 18 just for you in this NON-EROTIC story.

11/30 Trying in simple text. [Instead of RTF] If you think there's an age violation, let me know where- I don't see it in this non erotic story!

====12/4 still!!!!!!!! --------- rejected again!

[12/10 submitted a revised ch 5 and revised ch 6 and finally accepted ch 6]

jenorma2012jenorma2012over 6 years ago
ok

I enjoyed most of your stories, I really like the sci-fi stories but when I tried to click on part 5 it came up as being removed, I really want to find out what happened in that part

LitEroCatLitEroCatover 6 years agoAuthor
jenorma2012

This is a time travel series. Thanks to LIT, you have to travel 5 days into the future to see the real ch 5! ;-)

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