All Comments on 'Timely Arrival'

Well done.

Very good take on an old theme. I was in a quandary on how you, the author, would rescue the MC.

YOU DID GOOD! Right to and including the ending

Very good. Definitely enjoyed it

Wow! What a double round loop of time travel! Give it a read, you won't regret it.

Remarkable tale.

Remarkable author. Keep it up please

Simply beautiful - you hit on all cylinders. I was in tears at the end...5*

This normally isn't my kind of story. But, your writing is excellent. Thanks

An Incredible Story! I enjoy it very much.

"Theworld was literally my oyster."

Pretty sure you don't know what literally means, lol.

Strange, but good. Very well written.

I hope God grants Rose her wish...

Even though I knew what was going on and would happen, those was a wonderfully written and paced story full of warmth and love. Bravo!

One of the best I've read here. Also one of the most interesting concepts.

So well done, thank you!

Excellent!!!

5 Stars!!!

An absolute gem

Thank you

'"Theworld was literally my oyster."

Pretty sure you don't know what literally means, lol.'

Pretty sure thoughts of characters not always reach writer's standards so if a character 'Me and my girlfriend are going to Texas' a footnote on the correct grammar if your opinion valued.

Appreciate your verbless sentdence and typo.

Wonderful story.

Loved it.

Not necessarily a great SEX story, but quite possibly the BEST story I've ever read on Literotica... Great writing, great concept, great characters, and touched on all of my HOT- BUTTONS. I HOPE YOU WIN THE CONTEST!!

Incredible story. Certainly a lot of emotions to deal with in this story. Well told and unique.

This was great, for real. My dick blow out some white substance and my mind blown up into pieces.

The premises and execution was superb. I'd love to see more stories like this~

Not to be a downer but if her Jim is her grandson then when she died and her grandson was alive she wouldn't see her husband in the afterlife because he was now her grandson.

Just wow! keep up the great work.

Too many DDDD's, sorry

"Ms. Richards"? In the 1950s? More like "Miss Richards" I think.

Yeah, I can be picky sometimes. :)

Really good!!! Similar to Groundhog Day?

Wow! Great storey, amazing imagination, loved it. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Avery, very good story. Love it. AAAAAA++++++

Wow, such a unique and an amazing story! Love it! 👏👏👏

Incredible story line. Totally enjoyable.

Excellent. I’ll be reading more of your stories.

Great tale. My thanks to the author.

Best story in awhile. I’m a huge fan of time travel. But the way he went back is still a mystery. I think it should have been better explained even if it was a natural phanomena.

That was a really nice story, thank you for sharing

Great story… it could have been longer, maybe a short series, but lovely nonetheless!

Strange, but one hell of a love story. Makes one think.

Dam good story and I enjoyed a lot thank you.

Very good