All Comments on 'Tina's Tryout'

by StoneKidman

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StoneKidmanStoneKidmanabout 10 years agoAuthor
my first story

my first time publishing a story on Literotica, I've been writing stories since 1995; this is a big honor for me.

Stone

condor62condor62about 10 years ago
Nicely paced

I don't know anything about wrestling or the terms used in the story, but it was well written.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Just Some Background

would have really helped this to be a very good story.

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