All Comments on 'Tiny Tina'

Warm and lovely. Good character development of ALL the characters, plus good back stories. And just enough tension throughout to be believable. Well done.

Splendid story!

5

What an extremely lovely story. At times I had tears in my eyes. More please

Very nice. We were recently reunited with a cousin who was given up for adoption, and that happened through separate genetic tests through the same service.

Excellent story, my only complaint is that no Father ever is going to call his recently discovered daughter “a nosy little shit”, regardless of circumstances, that sounded very off, maybe it’s me.

Otherwise a good story and sadly has the ring of truth, a lot of extended families have a secret someone that is crying out for their real family to be found, thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz.

Absolutely wonderful!

Purplefizz, that was a joke. He was laughing as he said it. People can jokingly say such things and it shouldn't be taken seriously.

Very nice, Thanks for this! 5/5

I enjoyed reading the story there were a few instances where you used Tina instead of Maria but overall it was a good read.

I'm not crying! You're crying!

Loved it

Very good, sweet story. Loved the way Tina and Maria came together and how he sacrificed for love so they could be together. Excellent work, 5*

What a lovely story, I know a family that started very similar to this. Bravo! The depth and feeling is perfect.

A sweet feel good story to lighten the day. The only real conflict was inside Maria's head, but romance stories about the heart often struggle with building any kind of legitimate tension. Not that her decisions weren't logical throughout, but thankfully her long lost beau was romantic enough to take the leap. Not all adoption reunions turn out positive, speaking from experience, but it's nice to see one work out for everyone. Good job.

Loved it just a shame it seems it's the guy doing all the work in the relationship.

Excellent

Thanks for all the comments. As noted by others, there were a few name swaps that escaped the lazy eye of the reviewer (me!) I've had the story republished with corrections.

Wow! Another perfect story. A five star rating doesn’t do this work justice. I have a young adopted granddaughter and all I could think about was her life story as I read this.

I would love to see this “movie”. Thanks

Maria was kind an ass for the whole story, but i love Happy endings

Well done, beautifully written story...Than you!!!

Great written like the other romances, I Like your style to create the story, develope the characters, place emotional words and real athmosphere in your words. Thanks.

Excellence again.

Such a cute and charming story. 5/5

Nato_

I love happy endings. Thank you!

Absolutely stunningly beautiful …… it was may a horrible mistake, the adoption, but turned out well after all and the family really reuniting was the perfect topping ….. a truly romantic tale

💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝🌟🌹

Excellent. Outstating

Wonderful story, from an adopted persons point of view 5x5 stars