All Comments on 'Tips or Tits?'

There is a lot here for a short story. You did an excellent job with the dialogue which added character insight. I applaud the way a little drama was inserted without humiliating any of the characters. With this theme and variations of characters and plot, I think this has a lot of potential.

Loved it. Very fun. I'd like it if she was a bit more in charge, like make him lay on the floor while she stands over him ... but this way was great too!

Now I am hungry for pizza. Anyhow... five stars from here!

I loved it, it was short yet had so much. . .i could not pass any word up. I loved it. . Wish I could try this. Yes, a little more daring. . . I am so fucking wet right now. . this totally turned me on.... Write some more.

When I was in high school 2 of my friends delivered pizza and one lady always answered the door naked. They used to fight over her delivery when she called one in. They never got this far but it wasn't for lack of trying. Loved the story.