All Comments on 'To Dominate A Secretary'

Great build up. Sexy dom and appealing sub. Loved it.

.. serving sub kept on the edge, but satisfied. Dom being strict but also caring.

I can see her being introduced to his special fun room - thinking Shades of Grey here. Her training continues and she wears a special ankle bracelet showing her submissiveness.

Loved it. Hopefully a part 2 to come. Will be checking regularly for more.

This is really sexy. I hope it continues with the total dominance. I'd like to see some people on the train have a grope too because they realise she's a naughty girl. . And hey, it's just a fantasy anyway.

Exactly what I was looking for, love the humiliation aspects

Nice build up, with an element of realistic desperation, I look forward to seeing what happens. I have some thoughts if you don't already have the rest of the story mapped out I'd be happy to share them with you.

Taylor needs to share her with the other men in the office

Now that’s how you write an erotic story. 10 out of 10!

This was....one of the best stories I've read in a while.

Loved the build up and the action. Am excited by follow ups ; particularly with leticia

Such a great story, and so many more places to go with it!! looking forward to the next chapter! =)

Here’s to hoping you’ll continue this story.

I came so hard!

You've done the whole dominant businessman/slutty secretary story perfectly, I've really enjoyed it and have returned to it more than once. Would enjoy seeing a part 2 with Leticia getting in on the action.

When do Bella and Leticia hook up?

I very much enjoyed this. I'll have to remember this story to check back from time to time, just in case there would be another part.

It's all fun and games until she gets a yeast infection from swapping from ass to pushy. Take it from me, that's not fun

She is a bit of a dumb clumsy immature girl

wow wow wow

but anal is always painful for a virgin you didnt addressed that it seems as she felt no pain at all which is unrealistic

also anal to vagina is wrong atleast for her

i love how you put all the aspects in one story the nipple play the smackings the anal play buttplug the cunnilingus the orgasm bj both vaginal and anal ,scissor play fuck pain pleasure

then the humiliation

when he made her clean all the mess and forced her to show herself in that state among the clients and also made her go and show herself like that on subway(although this could have been avoided if she had another set of shirt bra or panty before meeting the clients and taking subway)

he is quite a pro at being a dom never used any degrading words but still degraded her by actions only and then easily get away by offering money as reward and discomfort he turned her into a prostitute even w/o her acknowledgement good brilliant

she aint much bright is she

you are a genius you put all the naughty things in just 3pages brilliant

i believe the receptionist is involved in the scheme of setting trap for her first during the papers jumble incident and the rescheduling incident

please continue this story i wish he falls for her and become possessive and jealous although he is a player surely

Great story. He should have made Bella lick his cock clean after he fucked the other two holes.

Wow ANONYMOUS really has a lot to say.. doesn't it?

this needs a next part!!

Nice start to the story. It would be great if you could continue it and not leave us hanging.

5*****

Well written, engaging, hot. An easy 5.

I like the Way she loose Control of the situation