All Comments on 'To Have, & Have Not'

DK hasn't shown me anything in this story that would be an obstacle to a successful relationship. Sure, they may have some differences about religion, but that hasn't stopped their friendship, and I sincerely doubt that it would affect their eminently possible marriage.

Otherwise, they're a very caring couple, with a long and succcessful history together, and they're dynamite in bed, especially for her first time. So why should they continue to deny themselves a chance at long term happiness?

Kydreamer

These two are made for each other, but could never last. Everything seems to be perfect for them, but the few comments early about religion and kids doom them. If Rick didn't want any kids now, instead of ever, they might be able to make it as a couple, but since he was able to pull out while making love to a woman he was passionately in love with, well, I have to believe he really doesn't want to be a father, now or ever. Since she does want kids, that alone will finish them eventually.

What makes this story so great is that by the end, you really want them to be together and find yourself arguing with them about a possible future.

A great fic!Loved it!

Good job of drawing out the time before fucking. Lost somewhere was how he set up physically to enter her. And what's with the pulling out stuff? Need to see more from you.