All Comments on 'To Have and To Hold Ch. 07'

When will they consumate? I'm starting to get antsy here!!! Great chapter. Keep them long! Next installment soon ;)

My goodness we need more... you write incredibly well

Love love love this series

Love it please keep writing.

Thanks for your comments! I appreciate the words of encouragement. Life has gotten in the way and I haven't been able to post as frequently. I'm trying to not ruin the storyline and keep working in developing the characters.

Your feedback is most welcome.

Love it, don't get discouraged!

Miss Fiction,

I am thoroughly enjoying this story. I see the sparring of assertion between the two characters as a pair of birds of prey dancing in mid air courtship.

The female lead is strong, driven but tempered with self reflection (doubt), the male maybe a little stereo typical (very much Richard Geer in Pretty Woman). But I suspect you will be exploring his newly exposed vulnerability.

Please show us more of their journey and thank you for sharing the glimpse of their lives so far.

We want more of this story.. please release soon

Have loved this series so far. Hope it's not too long until the next chapter.

For an amateur, this has been an amazing story so far. I have a love hate relationship with Chris, his possessiveness is borderline aggressive, but you’ve built Alex character so well, she’s the perfect unyielding compliment. Their future is gonna be so hot! One thing I might add, though I don’t really care for, is more description of how they look. Hope you continue to feel inspired.

Boo hiss. I was hoping for a better ending oh well can't always have what you want.

Have enjoyed the up and downs of this series, and looking forward to seeing how this continues into ch.08. Fingers crossed you release soon.

Ended too soon