All Comments on 'To Help a Friend'

Thank You!

Ready to see where this goes.

Please dont stop this run I have read every word and loved them all. It is so wonderful what you have written . Thank you for all the detail .

Bill

Don’t understand why she couldn’t have been a virgin. The over sized dildo doesn’t make sense either. The rest of the story is good and would like to see it progress. The older women seem to be in your plans but how?

Of course more is wanted!!!

she needs to go to college locally , and he needs to knockl her up jusyt like i did with my daughter! 23 years and 4 kids latter iut was the best decision we ever made! im just saying!!!

This is so interesting and hot! Want more!!!

I really enjoyed your take on "how would a father and daughter reasonably arrive at 'Let's have sex' without artificial outside forces"? To me, the only scene that was 'jarring' (in the sense of not seeming to have a good place) was the scene where she supposedly was blowing him immediately after her orgasm & scream. I felt it should have been one or the other, but not both without some type of indication that one of the options was imaginary/borderline hallucinogenic due to the endorphins etc. cascading through her bloodstream. Please provide a second part (I suspect that Chlynn will be invited to participate in the future - go for it!) and, should the requests follow, continue the series to where all three females end up participating.

Thank you. (5 stars)

Excellent work- very sexy, but also feels very real. Would love to read more!

We want more. This is so loving and real feeling.great job 5*

Very good story.... I’d love to read more!

Just my thoughts, but I’d love to see the best friend join in, with the girls sharing him, and his bed, and both quickly becoming pregnant as neither had been sexually active with boys and hadn’t needed any birth control. The best friend’s mom comes back into the picture, and she too, after years without sex, becomes a regular lover and pregnant too, since she didn’t need and birth control till now. The four form a solid foursome, sharing their man, and also each other. To simplify matters, the dad and mom marry, as she’s loved him for years, and the daughters marry each other to avoid any more scrutiny that necessary, all the while continuing to share mom and dad’s bed and bearing many more children.... 😈😈😈

Great story, more please.

Delicious!!!!

FDD

Definitely among the best around here. Really love the way things shape up slowly. It feels a lot more realistic than most father/daughter stories based on some kind of "accident", getting to the "fucking our brains out" part after like 2 or 3 paragraphs.

For a direct sequel I can vividly imagine CL coming back into the picture - with Aleah's consent of course - and the 2 girls exploring a side of their friendship they've never seen before *wink*.

The only slight critique I'd have, if I may, is that Diane character. She plops out of nowhere, stripping in his house and giving him a BJ? You could've done better than that. I can imagine her coming around to be a part of that weird "family" in a 3rd part, but it'll take a lot of time to make the reader believe that she's one of them.

I think it's safe to say that you broke the story leaving us all wondering what happens!

Thoughtful and tender. Would love to read more.

I love the story and can't wait for more. Here's my input: we understand that CL is Aleahs' " pseudo life sister " sister-from-another-mother type thing. But I would rather get that feel more from the dialog from the sisters and dads mental musings, than overstated in filler paragraphs and unnecessary quote annotations that they are not sisters. If they grew up together and dad is even paying for "not my daughter's" college I don't see why it would be a thought to any of the three except for when one says things like " that's 'my' Dad" vs 'our'

So tender, loving, and believable. Please do honor us with continuing the tale!

I loved that he basically rejected tactfully the girl's Cheryl Lynn's offer. I also loved that he did the same with Cheryl Lynn's mother. Even though he was very close to messing everything up. You need to have the daughter realize that she is in love with him. Not just a one off. And the friend this sister from another mother needs to realize even she wants him. She can't have him.

Please write/share more

Wonderful story

Enjoy it immensely

Good one...sensual...sexy...surprisingly deep!

I agree with the others re continuing the story. Your writing is excellent and we hope to see more!

To help a friend at least mention it is a repost, please.

The conflict within Aleah was delicate and masterfully presented. I would love to read more of their experiment and love story. Please post more with Cher-lyn and her mother.

Thank you.

The relationship between the characters is inspiring. The resulting sexual tension is palpable. Daryl’s consideration for Aleah is heart warming. I was a little disappointed that she only focused her thoughts on how her father always treated her in the past, instead of how he “was” treating her in the present. The idea of Cheryl-Lynn joining them, while a captivating novelty, is better suited to the thoughts Aleah indicated regarding not wanting to share her father. I felt their future, and the integrity of each would be best served in a monogamous intent. Dreadfully well written!! Thank you for sharing.

MORE!!!!!!! PLEASE???

Its been year, dont left us hanging like this

5 Stars. However, I'm a little confused. Does Diane have 5 kids? There is Cheryl-Lynn of course, but in one paragraph her siblings were Robert and Christine while in a later paragraph they were Caroline and Gregory.

Trying to read the story in the way it was intended but cutting through the analytical tripe, the dad wanted to get laid and engaged with his daughter to see if it would happen. Story seems good but the dad not so much. Thanks for this tale.

CL is honestly the worst type of friend. Just gross