All Comments on 'To Her Delight'

She obviously needed a cock so badly that her Viagra-induced husband could not provide, perhaps she also needs to be made into a Mommy by you?

as an older woman...i felt her yearning and heat as if it were my own....never have i considered a younger man in my explorations of passion...but this story makes me think maybe i should!!!

I gave it a 1

Unbelievably awful writing.from some idiot pretending to be a mooslim writing on a porn site.

This isn't a creative writing college exercise. Long sentences with six or seven conjunctions bore professors, not to mention most readers here. Remember who your readers are and write accordingly. THAT is the mark of true artistry. DT Iverson would never put anything like this here, he is a true artist. Study him and the others like him on this site to perfect your art. Good luck.

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